Undergraduate / 'I practice for the next football game' - commonapp short answer EC [2]

While practicing, I once again hit the pole of the flag against my head. Momentarily, I forget why I had joined color guard, but then remind myself of the first time I had seen a marching band show. While the band performed to various Disney songs, the color guard, totally in sync, completed the painting begun by the band with the twirling of each flag. I then think back to how last football game, I ruined the painting by messing up the toss and forgetting parts of the choreography. Frustrated, I picture myself when I first joined color guard, unable to do a drop-spin, the simplest move. I see that I have improved not only in skill, but even more so in endurance. Determined to improve further, I practice for the next football game and spin my flag. Another football game. Another chance to complete the painting. Another opportunity for improvement.

So I wrote about colorguard... I am ready to hear constructive criticism! It is due today :(