summerman52
Jan 2, 2012
Undergraduate / 'help of great faculty members' - why franklin and marshall [7]
"an epitome of a teenage girl's fantasy." the epitome sounds better to me. I think either works, its just preference.
with ice creamssecret behind ice creams. ice cream doesn't have to be plural
"as many exacting courses as she could to challenge herself" Exacting courses doesnt make sense to me.
"for almost one year and a half" a year and a half, sounds better to me
"an epitome of a teenage girl's fantasy." the epitome sounds better to me. I think either works, its just preference.
with ice creamssecret behind ice creams. ice cream doesn't have to be plural
"as many exacting courses as she could to challenge herself" Exacting courses doesnt make sense to me.
"for almost one year and a half" a year and a half, sounds better to me