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sinaraneto   
Jul 7, 2009
Letters / Invitation letter for visa - British Embassy in Cameron. Can you check grammar and spelling mistakes [3]

British Embassy in Cameron
Date: 07/07/2009

TO WHOM IT MY CONCERN

I, Sara Maria, resident in the UK, as a British citizen and full time student at Greenwich University (Old Royal Naval College, Park Row, SE10 9LS, London, UK.

I would like to invite my parents Mr Serg and Mrs Rosa Domingos Marcial Manuel to visit me in the UK in order to attend my wedding ceremony with Mr Ant Sara, to be held in London on the 22nd of August 2009

Mr. Serg passport number is D001, date of issue 08/09/2008 date of expiry 08/09/2011. Mrs Rosa Domingos Marcial uel passport number is D0, date of issue 09/02/2004, date of expiry 06/01/2010,

Mr. Serg and Mrs Rosa Domingos Marcial Manuel are both Angolan citizens with diplomatic passport, they are going to arrive in the UK on the 19th of August 2009 and they will be staying for one week. During they stay in the UK, they will be staying with me at my apartment at 104 Oak land, New Morlen,London, UK.
sinaraneto   
Jan 21, 2009
Undergraduate / An important issue ("She is always") [11]

can i have advice on how to start a repor about culture difference(islam) in the media, please please
sinaraneto   
Dec 5, 2008
Writing Feedback / European Union essay advice and corrections [2]

can i have same advices and corrections please
can you please let me know if is a good introduction thank you
Topic 1: do you think the EU should concetrate on further elargement, rather on intansified integration within the current borders?
introduction
This essay will discuss the question either European Union should continue it enlargement process or intensifying integration within the current border, because the last 12 new entry member into the European Union membership have put same fear among the citizens of the old members states because they are not so sure about the benefit of this integration because of the current economic and unemployment problems of this countries they believe that the accession of 12 new members will increase immigration in the Western Europe countries.

However I believe EU should continue its enlargement process in order to meet its challenge which is the put together a stronger, powerful and bigger European Union able to self defends from outside attackers.

Topic 2: should turkey become a full member of the EU within the next 5years? please present relevant facts and information and outline positions from both sides of the argument and came to your own conclution.

introduction
This essay will discuss the problems about Turkey access to the European Union. In October 2005 the EU has started a process of negotiation to access Turkey in the Union, but the issue is divided in two opinions within the EU countries. Britain, Portugal and Italy are in favor of turkey access because of its geographic location while Germany, France and Austria are against turkey integration for economic, cultural, religion and political reason.

However I believe turkey has to fulfill the Copenhagen criteria include the human right problems before join the union in order to meet the EU standard and have a positive integration.
sinaraneto   
Dec 1, 2008
Essays / words contrasting the way in which people live their lives [3]

This essay will investigate the contrasting ways in which people live has changed in the current financial crisis.
The world is experiencing a tragic economic crisis caused by the rising price of oil and fuel and the credit crisis which have affected many business sector such as banks and insurance company, but it also have had a negative effect on people's life in many aspects.

According to Kollewe and Seager (2008) The financial problems have also hit the job market as number of unemployed claiming jobseeker benefit in Britain has never been so high in the last 17 years it rose by 31,800 last month to 939,000 and because the job market has became very tight it is quite difficult to find a new job in our days.

As the price of everyday product have gone up British people are finding difficult to live their lives as they used to, therefore in order to cope with the financial crisis they have decide to changed their shopping habit since the start of it.

Ross(2008) have said the that due to the financial situation 65% of British consumers are not been faithful to their shopping retailer because there are cutting out or changing to a food cheaper s retailer hopping they are switching from M&S and Waiters to Aldi, Lidl and Netto shopping in order to save money and survive.

marketingservicestalk has find out that many people are ready to make same change on their life habit due to the current economic situation in the world. According to the site 32% have already decide to cut off same luxuries such as holidays or weekend trips, mobile phone contracts, buying a new car, switching energy suppliers, leisure activities people have decide to do joking rather them going gym or swimming and instead of going out to meal or a movie with family and friends, they have decide to stay at home for home cooked fresh meal in order to save as much money as they can. Despite all the negative impact of the global financial crisis on people's life style Miranda Fitzgerald 2008 who have said that many online company such as Yahoo! Finance UK which have had a boom of 48% customers accessing the sites because consumer are changing to online shopping habit. They prefer the web to find out instant news and information about the current financial crises as well as to buy their needs items such books, Clothes, books, CDs and DVDs which are the more requested product on the net

The global financial crisis have also had a very serious affect on people's health, since the start of the economic crisis the number of people suffering from heart disease due to the high level of stress caused by business financial difficulties, apart from that the result of the financial crisis has also increased the number of suicides in the world. Kennedy 2008 wrote that many people are finding hard to deal with their financial problem caused by the world financial crisis, the author give an example of a former money manager who decide to kill himself after killing his whole family including his 3 children, wife and mother in law because of financial problem.

People are conscious that they have to save more money as this economic crisis has affected them directly Consumers and government have to work to resolve these economic conditions. In conclusion the global financial crisis has increased the poverty in the world and have changed many people every day habit.

can you please look at it
sinaraneto   
Nov 29, 2008
Essays / words contrasting the way in which people live their lives [3]

a do not know how to start Write an essay of 500 words contrasting the way in which people live their lives in the current financial crisis with how they did so previously.

can you help me please
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