Coriolis
Jan 10, 2012
Undergraduate / 'I love how inspiring you are' - My love letter to Reed. [3]
What type of essay are you writing for? Expository?
I will let someone else correct any spelling errors.
I would remove the constant use of "I" and replace it with something else.
Such as:
"I love how inspiring you are. I love how I know my passions for art and writing will take on wings and soar with the help of Reed's encouraging community and atmosphere."
becomes
Love how inspiring you are. My passions for art and writing will..."
What type of essay are you writing for? Expository?
I will let someone else correct any spelling errors.
I would remove the constant use of "I" and replace it with something else.
Such as:
"I love how inspiring you are. I love how I know my passions for art and writing will take on wings and soar with the help of Reed's encouraging community and atmosphere."
becomes
Love how inspiring you are. My passions for art and writing will..."