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Posts by Betsy01
Joined: Jan 14, 2012
Last Post: Jan 15, 2012
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Betsy01   
Jan 15, 2012
Undergraduate / Harvard Supplement on my interest in rap music? [5]

wow this is good , you had alot of interesting points about rap... and i liked how that shaped your life.
this was a bit long but i'm sure you'll fix it. ... and good luck (:

hope you can check mine out for to see if mine is ready to be send to colleges?????plzzzzzzzz
Betsy01   
Jan 15, 2012
Undergraduate / 'done a rigorous research on many universities' - DIVERSITY ESSAY [6]

WOW!! i liked it! i also agree with your parents and you about how community services helps give a better understanding of life, giving you compassion and love to what you do. I like your fathers phase of "Achieve your goal, but also help others achieve theirs" that really thoughtful/ (: nice job.
Betsy01   
Jan 15, 2012
Undergraduate / 'being Mexican American is tough' - personal experience to colleges [8]

thanks that's my goal in life, be able to take good care of people not only for money but to see a smile on their face and make them feel care for.

...I understand it's tough not being born here in US. but you can find help to get those opportunities don't be discourage. (:

do you think i should add or take any words that don't sound good?
Betsy01   
Jan 15, 2012
Undergraduate / 'being Mexican American is tough' - personal experience to colleges [8]

My Personal Experience
I once heard in a movie about how being Mexican American is tough. It's true. I was born in Seattle, Washington, but my parents are from Guadalajara, Mexico, nearly three thousand miles away. I was lucky enough to visit Mexico in the summer of 2010 with my younger brother. I returned to Mexico in the summer of 2011, by myself, to assist my maternal grandmother who was experiencing health issues. This solo trip to Mexico would open my eyes and help me to see what the world is really like. Now I'm more determined to succeed in my life. I can't thank God enough for my parents and their sacrifices.

Even though Mexico is just to the south, it's considered a third world country. Mexicans don't have the same opportunities that we do here in the north, or El Norte, as it's known. For most Mexicans the dream of going to America is only a dream. Everywhere I went, no matter if it was outside my grandmother's house or downtown, I saw children, teenagers and even adults roaming around the streets knocking on people's doors asking for food, money and jobs. I know we have poverty here in the United States but in Mexico it's different. It was a shock to see the land my parents and ancestors came from in this way. This is what my parents left behind so my brothers and I could live safely.

I'll never forget the face behind Mexico's poverty. I remember seeing an older woman missing a leg, dragging herself all over the city. Her clothes were filthy. You could tell that she hasn't showered for days. Most of the people just looked at her disgusted. Yet I couldn't stop looking at that woman, even as I walked away with my family. I wish I could have helped her. I wish I could have done something. When I think of this woman, I think of myself, and my family. My parents could have elected to stay in Mexico. They could have gotten sick, or gotten into some sort of accident. Things could have been different.

It is hard being a Mexican American. I'm only eighteen, but I've already decided no matter what it takes I will never give up. The thought of wasting what you've been given is scary enough. I want to become a registered nurse and I know it will take a lot of determination but I'm up for the challenge. I feel I became a different person on my return trip to Mexico. My passion for helping others has grown stronger. I'll graduate from high school in 2012. I'm proud to say that because of everything I've learned so far. I have a pretty good idea where I want to go in my life. Maybe my return trip to Mexico was my parents' way of saying, "In order to see Heaven, you have to go through Hell." Maybe...

-Betsy Rodriguez
Betsy01   
Jan 14, 2012
Undergraduate / 'Serving God with their Jesuit Catholic values' - Seattle University is a good match [2]

I seek a college that's passionate for education but also passionate for serving God in all things. I'm a religion person and I believe growing spiritually with God, gives you a deeper understand of life. Seattle University will be a good match for my educational goals because of their passion for education and serving god with their Jesuit Catholic values. I'm Catholic and I feel that SU values will inspire me in doing more good, and take action in my community to help others. The fact that the average class size is 20 students that will be challenging but well push my knowledge to learn more.
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