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Jan 19, 2012
Undergraduate / 'transferring to Photography program' - you a perfect candidate for FIT? [4]

I'm not really good at editing but I spotted some grammatical errors.

...Honor Certificate from Thomas Edison High School of Technology. I thanthen got accepted to the University of the District of Columbia in Spring 2010 (or take out in Spring 2010 entirely) majoring in Graphic Design. While attending UDC I became a freelance Fashion Photographer for different clients and companies in the DMV area. I'm still in the process of completing my Associate in Graphic Design and I'm expecting to graduate in Spring 2012.

After graduating I would like to pursuitpursue my dreams of getting accepted at FIT and becoming a famous fashion photographer.

Good luck!
podkin   
Jan 18, 2012
Undergraduate / Parsons Admission Essay - What influenced me to want to get into graphic design [5]

Write a one-page statement describing the events and ideas that led to your interest in the major (graphic design) stated on your application form.

Ever since I was a little boy, I have been intrigued by art. My father was a youth ministry pastor that used a different approach when preaching to us kids. He would draw pictures on giant easel pads to grab our attention and to communicate to us better. I always thought it was really cool to use pictures to explain stories from the Bible. I learned that talking or reading wasn't the only way to convey a message. My interest in visual art began when I realized you could use illustrations to say anything.

When I was a little older, I asked my dad if I could help him. I received my first art lesson from him by learning how to color. For example, I learned where to draw shadows depending on where the sun was. During his sermon, I remember looking around in nervous excitement trying to figure out the reactions of those around me. I felt really proud seeing something I helped create displayed to everyone. This moment made me want to do something creative with my life.

In high school I decided to try a computer graphics class. I enjoyed the class so much that I started a website to gain more experience working with graphic design. Working on the site was a great opportunity to learn about Photoshop and the Internet. I came upon online tutorials and learned about the individual tools in Photoshop and how to make certain effects. I even had a chance to impress my computer graphics teacher with something I learned out of class. This experience not only gave me valuable knowledge, but also strengthened my interest in graphic design.

Although my plans changed and I ended up graduating with an economics degree, I never stopped using Photoshop, even though by now I knew Photoshop 5.5 was just too ancient and outdated. My old church friends all remember my dad and his drawings. Even though my dad no longer draws pictures, I will always remember his illustrations and how he inspired and instilled an appreciation for art in me. It was my dad who got me thinking about art school in the first place by discreetly putting brochures in my room.

It's 5:30 AM and I'm not sure what to think. I'm afraid that it's too short.. or it sounds too weird. Hopefully by the time I wake up, I'll have my head on straight.

Any help would be greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance!

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