Student Talk / How to enhance my English? [52]

I recommend reading a lot... but it doesn't have to be books, it can be an article online, a magazine.... try to build your vocabulary and never stop thinking, thinking a lot keeps your brain intuitive.

Research Papers / Research Topic: reducing electrical shocks from electrical outputs at home [3]

definition of electrical shocks from outputs - receptacle providing a place in a wiring system where current can be taken to run electrical devices... hoped this helped good luck

Undergraduate / 'degree in business management' - Essay describing long-term career goals [5]

First, i notice that you used to many "I"s and teachers hate seeing this... i would know from experience. hoped this helped

Dissertations / Business Management / Databases topics [15]

To find a good article online you should search with more depth... If you want to find an article on a specific topic make sure you type in what exactly you are looking for.... lastly if this isn't any help go to your local library and find articles or books to research.

Essays / Starting an essay on too much attention to the personal lives of famous people [4]

I agree with what dumi is saying and also think about what you should write as your thesis... I recommend saying "how and why people are so into celebrities lives and so on... and why figure out why people should worry about their own lives and their families instead of others. Hope this helps

Undergraduate / 'belief in math concepts' - University of Chicago prompt "Find X" - feedback [2]

You did a fantastic job answering the question as well as explaining the rationality behind your answer.