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Posts by zogi maral
Joined: Mar 29, 2012
Last Post: Apr 4, 2012
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zogi maral   
Mar 31, 2012
Scholarship / "My Hacking Dream" NTU Scholarship ESSAY [4]

Hi,

I give you my point of view, but please look if there are better suggestions,

"Soon we realized we had been victims of hacking "

"computer security, da ta inscription and related issues." <---------------- did you want to say : encryption instead ?

"...in computer science and make a mark in the subfield of system and network security ." OR "...in computer science and make a mark in system and network security"

Good luck with security, it's a very nice topic
zogi maral   
Mar 29, 2012
Graduate / What led you to select your program (Computer Science ) at our university ? [6]

Since and early age, I have been passionate about computers, and have been looking for the opportunity to assist me to gain profound knowledge in the field of computer science without financial burden and unbearable education cost.

I believe I have made the right choice by opting for your university as you are offering tuition-free programs and providing the students with a competency in current and updated technology .Obtaining a bachelor's degree is a necessary first step, as I am keen on performing graduate-level academic research in the near future.
zogi maral   
Mar 29, 2012
Writing Feedback / The difference in drugs and alcohol in women. [2]

Hi,

get or find ?? ---> ""get find information.." , I think one of them will be good

My suggestions :

"..one of my weaknesses is .."

"Another weakness" ---> how about : "Also, I have a hard time .."

I hope that helps
zogi maral   
Mar 29, 2012
Writing Feedback / Good habits make good human being - essay [3]

Hi,

does the comma have to be in here ? : "Practicing good things in our lives , make us and our surrounding happy"
and in here too : "greatness is , indulging .."
and "the habits like , reading .."
and "that teach , the proper way "

"to becomea good human being "

"Let's discuss in detail "

"if we look into biography "

"they had indulged healthy habits "

did u want to say : ".. and live the moral virtuesof life .." ??

" ..into a nutshell ..."

"..and playing group sport ..."

I wish u good luck
zogi maral   
Mar 29, 2012
Research Papers / benefit of peer based learning and how to maximize your fellow students' experience? [3]

the benefits can include high achievement in terms of knowledge , skills attitudes and confidence, a great psychological well-being, as every peer is able to spontaneously collaborate, given the opportunity to pass on information, share and gain knowledge from their fellow students, with whom they can identify and build positive relationship with. They also would be grouped according to their communication abilities,a quiet and shy one would be paired with a more extroverted one in order to make the learning more effective and much easier.
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