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sally awada

Jul 16, 2012

Letters / Letter to a friend - as she is sad because her parrot has died [4]

I'll be coming to meet you next week.T ry to forget ChiukI. I know that it is very difficult for you as you loved it ~~like anything~~so much , but it is for your good to be strong. You can buy an another parrot. However, I know that no other person or creature on this earth can take place of Chiuki in your heart,

nice ideas:)
i hope i helped:)

sally awada

Jul 4, 2012

Writing Feedback / FAST FOOD has many good effects on population? [9]

u should watch out for some punctuation: fast food restaurants .

Otherwise, the essay is good, but u can enter more examples; the more examples u used, the more realistic u'r essay will be.
:)

sally awada

Apr 19, 2012

Writing Feedback / THEY SAY LIFE IS HARD - essay [8]

ok i'll say it: thx sara:)

sally awada

Apr 19, 2012

Writing Feedback / THEY SAY LIFE IS HARD - essay [8]

thx all:)

sally awada

Apr 19, 2012

Writing Feedback / THEY SAY LIFE IS HARD - essay [8]

thanks, no i thought it was totally wrong that's why i asked someone to fix it:)

sally awada

Apr 19, 2012

Research Papers / Doing my reseach paper on "Why is Capital Punishment Wrong" [6]

YOU CAN START BY THIS: many theories swirl around the discussion of CAPITAL PUNISHMENT like the wall cloud of an eye of a hurricane.

THEN U CAN DEFINE CAPITAL PUNISHMENT ..
START WITH THE FIRST POINT OF VIEW, GIVE UR OPINION
SHIFT TO THE OTHER POINT AND GIVE UR OPINION
PRESENT YOUR ATTITUDE CLEARLY TOWARDS CAPITAL PUNISHMENT

can u plz help with my thread: they say life is hard?!:)

sally awada

Apr 19, 2012

Writing Feedback / THEY SAY LIFE IS HARD - essay [8]

they say life is hard..it's never what we want..it throws us in a ship and take us through a jaunt..
they say life is hard..it never cleans the past..it always throw the card by which our memories it can blast...
they say life is hard ..it's never what we need..it's always what we had ...but can't see it through our greed

they say life is hard...it's never something bland ..it's always something shallow that we rarely understand..
they say life is hard..it's never something true..it's always something bogus we usually fall through..
they say life is hard ..it's never something fair..it always disappoints us..fills our hearts with despair..
they say life is hard...but we need to survive..we have to find a way for us..we should strive..
they say life is hard...but we need to move on..we have to dig our way..we have to live our eon..
they say life is hard..but i do believe...that GOD is with us..he is our relief.. he simplifies our world..fills it with regard ...even if ..

they say life is hard...!