Writing Feedback / TOEFL: which do you prefer: A high paying job or quality sparse time [2]

Some people prefer to have a job with a lower payment in order to save time for their vacations. Others, However, Stay in a different ground. As I am concerned, I would like to involve in a job with a higher salary rather than a job with less responsibility and shorter work hours. I am going to support my choice in the following paragraphs.

Nowadays prices are so high that a person cannot afford full expenses of the life without possessing a full-time job. These include several expenses we have to afford every month, especially in a big city or metropolis. Living expenses are so great that everyone cannot afford them. For example, cost of house rental is very high. Even though you to choose to live in a small apartment you have to pay a lot for it. Money is also an essential part of rearing good children and providing them with high quality educations which cannot be found in almost all public schools. That's why money obtained from short work hours won't be enough for a high quality family life.

Money saving is another reason that persuades us to work for a longer time to gain more money. Everyone knows it well that money saving is absolutely necessary. A person who aims to make financial progress has to save money and invest the money saved for further profits. Moreover, saving money saving for emergency use is not only a good idea but also an important precautionary measure. Suppose that you got ill and unfortunately insurance won't pay the hospital expenses. What can you do to overcome this problem? Having a good job probably with a longer work hours helps us save money for future investments or for using in an emergency.

Last but not least, attaining a greater amount of money through working longer not only helps us to provide our family a better welfare, but also improves the quality of our vacations and recreational activities. To me , the quality of my recreational activities is more important than quantity of them. For instance, when I have less money , I have to travel to nearby cities to spend my vacations. But, Have I enough money, I prefer to travel abroad rather than traveling in my own country. Therefore, working longer will improve a person's chance of getting more from his or vacations.

To recapitulate, working longer for a higher payment would be an ideal idea because it provides us enough money to afford everyday expenses, Save and invest money for the future uses and a higher quality hubbies.

Writing Feedback / 'selecting a city as my favorite place' - TOEFL:Where to Visit [2]

Every one always prefers to visit a place that has been an ideal place in her/his mind. Some people prefer to visit a place that lays nearby them. Others are more courageous and undertake the risk of traveling to new and unforeseen places and cities. I belong to the second group whom dreams were always travelling to a far beautiful city which is located in another continent. If i have a chance to visit every city in the world, i would like to go to New York. It's based on the reasons explained below.

First factor influencing my decision to choose a city is the beauty of the city. In a beautiful city i can not enjoy the view of streets and buildings ,i also will be able to have a good time and calm my mind. Even in noisy and crowded city ,pretty street and apartments assist mental health of both inhabitants and visitors. Another factor that is important for me to choose a city for visiting is its diversity of cultures. Although visiting a city having different cultures and tradition is very interesting. Visiting the city that embraces many of this newly acquainted cultures will be very appealing. In such city you can learn about diversity of cultures and try many kinds of foods. Fortunately, New York possesses both above mentioned features, beauty and cultural diversity.

Another factor that i would rather consider in the process of selecting a city as my favorite place to visit is how much i can learn from there. I would like to travel to a city where i could learn much from its culture,city management and science. New York is a very big city that includes a variety of ethics due to the large amount of immigrants live there. So it is a very appropriate place to meet person from other cultures and learn about them. It also has gained acclaim to be one of the most significant scientific centers of the world. Consequently,i have more chance to increase my scientific knowledge thorough traveling there.

Were i lucky enough to choose a place to visit, I would rather go to New York. This is because it is a very good place both to enjoy and learn.