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Jeslyn   
Jul 6, 2012
Writing Feedback / The best way to achieve happiness is not to make others happy. [2]

When I was so young, I read book told about Won-hyo who is very famous Buddhist monk in Korea . The story is like this. He left for high grade of Buddhism. During the trip, he stopped by house where no one live for sleeping. At midnight, he felt thirsty and just looked around. At that time, he can not see anything. Because it was too dark. While he groped around, he found a bowl with cool water. He was so happy and drank it. He thought it is really delicious water. And he fell asleep again. When he woke up, he became so surprise. Because what he drank is rotten water in the skull. He realized that everything comes from mind. And he became great Buddhist monk. I don't have religion and believe Buddhism but I agree his idea. Everything comes from mind. We can not be happy through of others happy.

When people will be happy? Happiness is not too far. Some people feel happy when they are full. Other people enjoy when they sleep well. If we are student, we will be happy when we get great score or be praised by parents. For me, when I hang out with my friends or eat very sweet lolly, I will be so happy. Like these, happiness is so different by people.

One of my friend is so kind. She is so pretty and so nice. She doesn't know "NO". Always she does say "OK" or "All right". Because she doesn't want to make people unhappy. Maybe when people hang out with her, people will enjoy time. She smiles always and agree with them. But she told me she want to change her personality. Only taking care of other's feeling without her condition makes her stressful.

Of course, some people are happy when they share their things. Some people do volunteer and others donate. But it can not be said as the best way to be happy. People has various personality, identity and preference. The way to be happy is always changed by people and time.
Jeslyn   
Jul 4, 2012
Writing Feedback / People need government's help or not. [2]

Those who say they don't want to pay tax. They say that the government does not take care them but poor and special people and they don't get any profit from them. But it is not true. If people live alone without any help, it is not appear any nation or government in the world. There is two reason that people need government's help. One is for solving the problem that is already happened and the other one is for preventing problem that will happen.

First, people need government's help to treat big incident that can not be solved by individual. Individual can not solve Natural disaster like Earthquake or tornado, war and starvation etc. . Also children and elder who don't have supporter can be protected only by government. Because it is required lots of resource, wealth, effort and time.

Second, people want government's help to be assured their rights. They are protected through of police and firefighting . They can reduce burden with insurance. If they are so poor people, they can be guaranteed at least education and life by government.

Of course, government can not solve all problem. But there are lots of things that only can be overcomed by government. Because of this, individual need government's help.
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