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JSnyder726   
Dec 30, 2008
Undergraduate / 'my discovery of engineering' - upenn professor essay [13]

Most professors have pages. When you find them in the faculty directory there will be links to their pages. Sometimes it's a simple university provided thing with varying amounts of info, and sometimes they have their own pages entirely.
JSnyder726   
Dec 30, 2008
Undergraduate / 'my discovery of engineering' - upenn professor essay [13]

It helps to know what you want to do for undergrad. Then you can find that undergrad department, look through their faculty directory, and find a professor that teaches something you're partcularly interested in. Like, for my essay, I picked a professor who researches Personality Psychology and Personality Theory, because I want to study that realm of psychology. Something like that.
JSnyder726   
Dec 30, 2008
Undergraduate / UPenn Professor Essay (studying people's personalities) [4]

Name a Penn Professor with who you would like to study or conduct research with, explain why.

It's not much, but it's all I could really write. Let me know what you think.

While Psychology in itself interests me, I'm particularly interested in studying people's personalities. Not the general thoughts of people, but what separates us from each other. That's why studying with Professor David Williams would be an amazing experience for me. His work in Personality Theory, trying to understand human nature to be more than mechanical, but creative and free and individual fascinates me to no end. I've always built strong connections with my teachers, but they're always stronger when we share a common interest. I've built a stronger relationship with my English teachers because of this. But now, I see a new chance in a sea of professors from tens of schools. I see a teacher whom I can really connect with.
JSnyder726   
Dec 30, 2008
Undergraduate / Upenn Professor ESSAY ("great relationship with teachers") [8]

In the first sentence it should be,

I have always had a great relationship with teachers whom I can relate to.

Not sure if it's really important, but I've had it drilled into my head, so it stood out.
JSnyder726   
Dec 30, 2008
Undergraduate / NYU supplement Why this college?! [5]

I think it might sound better to change that last sentence to

The unique opportunity to gain first hand experience in the world's financial centers would give me an invaluable advantage in my future career.

Both make sense, but this one sort of just flows better in my mind. Not really sure how much it helps.
JSnyder726   
Dec 30, 2008
Undergraduate / Being counselor for friends - CMU App Essay Why you chose CMU/Major [5]

As my time in high school has come to a close, I've taken the time to seriously think of what I want to do with my life. In this, I realized that I was a kind of counselor for most of my friends, and even some people I didn't know well. Doing this has helped me to learn a lot about myself. I've realized a deep capacity for compassion and empathy. I'm just able to listen for hours on end and relate to people, to help them. I've also been led found a very interesting subject.

The human mind is a fascinating thing. For a long time, I have wondered how people think, why they think the way they do, and tried utilizing that to figure out how they would act and what they would think in certain situations. In a way, I use my friends as subjects. I really enjoy doing this, and that was how I discovered what I wanted to do with my life. I want to study psychology and, hopefully, open my own practice as a psychologist.

I'm a student who is always looking for a challenge, and I think CMU can provide that. The coursework looks to be engaging and demanding. The notion of studying intelligence and learning in machines is something I haven't seen elsewhere, and with my natural interest in technology, it's fascinating. I love the variety of research courses, since it allows for me to focus more on studying social and behavioral psychology and not the ones I'm less interested in. I really want to live in a city while I attend college, and Pittsburgh provides one that is new and fresh. Carnegie Mellon has jumped out at me, to the forefront of my college search. With every new thing I learn, Carnegie Mellon increasingly seems to be the place for me.

At Thanksgiving, I was able to see my Aunt Kelly again. She's a relative I don't see often because she's a professor of psychology at the University of Denver, so she lives all the way out in Colorado. When I told her my interest in studying psychology, she was ecstatic. She'd finally have someone besides her students to talk to that would actually want to listen (My uncle tends to snore...).

We talked about my college goals and she offered to help me make my picks and get through the admissions process. I told her a few of the colleges I was interested in, including CMU. She lauded the psychology department and told me that it would be a great school for me, especially since I want go on to study Clinical Psychology in graduate school, and CMU is a good place to get the much-needed research experience. In our correspondence over the past few weeks, she's helped me get my list down to twelve colleges, and I started applying.

I've used the College Board, the Princeton Review, and a number of other services to try and match myself to colleges. When I did so, Carnegie Mellon University was in the top five of all of those lists, if not the number one. I took a look at the site, and was pleased by what I saw. The plethora of activities (I've always wanted to try fencing...) and the campus location are ideal for a student like me. I love to be in or near the big city, and, over the years, I've been involved in more extracurricular activities than I can count. A big selection ensures that I'll find a place where I belong.

Life at CMU seems to be a good fit for me. Living in the Global Studies House would be an amazing experience. I've always been interested in becoming a more globally aware person. There's a program at my school called Social Studies Seminar. In this program, the students become actively involved in global politics. Through it I've managed to participate in three model UNs, with two more coming, I've been to the UN twice, and I've participated in the United Nations Student Conference on Human Rights since my freshman year. I was afraid that leaving this program behind would make it harder to find as many opportunities for such active involvement, but the concept of living in the Global House is a welcome relief.
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