Limon1909 2 / 2 Dec 29, 2008 #1Please comment on errors or bad sentences! Thanks in advance!Please tell us what led you to select your anticipated academic program and/or NYU school/college, and what interests you most about your intended discipline.Applying as undecided I currently prefer the Business & Political Economy program over the co-major in International Business. Both appeal to me as I want to educate myself to work in an international corporation or organization. I am interested in learning about the interaction between politics, economics and business in this closely connected world. The unique opportunity to gain first-hand experiences in the world's financial centers would give me an invaluable advantage in my future career. Characters 500/500
atomvik 3 / 14 Dec 29, 2008 #2nice. i don't see any corrections seeing as how any more characters would take you over.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129 Dec 30, 2008 #4Applying as undecided, I currently prefer the Business & Political Economy program over the co-major in International Business.Both appeal to me, as I want to educate myself on working in an international corporation or organization.
JSnyder726 2 / 6 Dec 30, 2008 #5I think it might sound better to change that last sentence toThe unique opportunity to gain first hand experience in the world's financial centers would give me an invaluable advantage in my future career.Both make sense, but this one sort of just flows better in my mind. Not really sure how much it helps.