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Ibrik   
Aug 11, 2012
Writing Feedback / 'computers and machines are the best inventions' - TOEFL [NEW]

Most people prefer working with people than with machines.
There are host of occupations that we can choose, but we ought to be sure that we choose the best occupation for us due to the fact that only one profession is exactly approached for us. Occupations mostly divided in two groups. First group is a list of occupations where we should have computer knowledge and the second list where we mostly work with people. In my opinion occupation where we primarily use machines is much better since computers are able to give the exact counting.

Occupations like engineering, science and professions similar to it have to have the exact indications for building big stores. Moreover, while working, computers do not distract us from our job and that is why we would be able to finish all our projects on time.

On the other hand this kind of job might be boring for some of people since they do not meet any people and could not share their ideas or ask questions related to their job. Surely, mutual grasps among people are always useful, but in my opinion computers are giving us an opportunity to have access to exact counting and that nullifies the meaning of statement above.

For most employees computers are indispensable due to the fact that in today's scenario computers are playing an essential role in our lives. For example: It seems like students do not have to use computers, but internet access is always needed. And even sportsmen are using internet for discovering beautiful sites of the city which they are travelling to. Furthermore drivers are in need of GPS for knowing where they are located, for knowing if there is a traffic jam or not.

Computers are not just made for calculations, finding out the destination of your relatives and your friends, but also for communicating with them. With the help of computers we are sharing our emotions with friends that are living in different continents, countries; we can communicate with them even if they are on a spaceship. Consequently, computers and machines are the best inventions of mankind and can be used for increasing your knowledge, world view and for getting higher status in your career.
Ibrik   
Aug 11, 2012
Writing Feedback / 'ways of becoming mature and courageous' - There's no success like failure [5]

Yes, you should use two or three examples.
Try to use the structure:
1)Make introduction on what you are writing about.
2) Give a reason and spend the first body part on supporting your reason
3)Then give another reason and support it (Don't use more than one example i each part)
4) Conclusion should contain no less words than introduction. Try to use at least 300 words for your essay.
Guess, that will help :)
Ibrik   
Aug 11, 2012
Writing Feedback / You can learn a lot about people by clothes they wear. [NEW]

In our daily life we meet different people; they have different characters, different hairstyles and different clothing style. I agree with the statement above. Particularly young generation has clothing diversities and they are always wearing different. For example: Youth wears a uniform at school or university, wears casuals while going out with friends and wears a special costume that they were keeping carefully to the parties.

It might be difficult to reveal a personality character of a person but it is possible and the main tips are simple. For instance: If you notice that one of your friends wears an ironed and clean uniform while another one is sitting with white and clean shirt and solving math problems you would easily distribute them into groups. Moreover, most people pay attention to your shoes and clothing style. And they anticipate to see what you will wear before meeting you. If you are going to meet your grandfather and expect him to see in formal suite, but you see him in a shirt with a picture of Mickey Mouse on it, you would pause for a minute and would try to understand the situation.

Also clothes may represent you hometown or your country. While wearing national clothes and representing your motherland in a foreign country, people will watch your behaviors and will try to understand the traditions of your motherland. On the other hand people are paying attention to the colors that you wear. If you wear mostly black clothes like everybody does in our country that will indicate your passiveness in society, but wearing colorful clothes indicates your strong and confident character.

In some cases wearing clothes with a big style may diminish results of your efforts for being a leader in society since it is inappropriate to look different from your coworkers at job or from people that you are working with. In many real situations, a number of people people wear a very strange clothe for their work, so it will bring unpleasure to the others who will work with them. Due to the fact that host of people are paying attention to your clothing style, it is a substantial character of your leadership skills in each and every society.

In conclusion, I will stay with my opinion and recommend people to change their clothes often, because it will give them enough confidence, so they will be able to reach their goals easily. Therefore, wearing simple and stylish things may stress your ability of being a leader and may inspire your partners so, they will make you their role model.
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