Writing Feedback / Raising petrol price must be the last solution for controlling traffic and pollution [2]

Hi guys, This is my essay. Hope to receive your feedback :D

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. Do you agree or disagree ?

Whether or not the increasing in the petrol price is the number one method to avoid the growing traffic and polluted environment has aroused a controversy among concerning people in the modern life. Personally, I am more inclined to the latter viewpoint on the grounds of economic and society.

Undeniably, no sooner the price of petrol been risen than it obligatorily face to opposite thinking of most of citizens. Initially, not only this method affect directly to every pocket of customers but it also creates inflation to the whole economic whilst other products become more expensive, especially products from use-petrol industries. Additionally, it feasibly leads to negative thinking in low salary employees. Eventually, it is plausible to become one of the main reasons of increasing illegal activities and put social security at risks.

More importantly, this is no only one way to solve these problems. Publishing ideas about using clean-source vehicles such as bicycle or electronic cars, electronic bicycle is also a effective solution. Equally remarkable, only by renovating the infrastructure of the cities can growing traffic issue be resolved. For instance, when obtaining more over bridges, the traffic jam in Ha Noi capital reduced dramatically in recent years.

For the mentioned justifications, it is my firm belief that the increasing the cost of the petrol is only the last method and hardly contribute in resolving these problems. It is more advisable to propose other ways which more suitable than the former way be.

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Writing Feedback / Causes, effects, and solutions to DIVORCE [2]

Divorce is a subject controversy. Some people believe that this issue has negative effects on social development or children nurture, while others claim that it is a natural activity in this life. My essay will discuss causes and effects of this tendency.

There are economic, educational, psychological reasons of this issue.
First, the lack of life experiences is a cause of the ending of marriages, which usually to happen with young couples. Besides, as a result of conflicts in normal life, especially financial conflicts, people decide to not live together anymore with hope of finding freedom for their future lives. For instance, no sooner did economic crises happen in 2008 than my friend's family had to face with many difficulties. After that, many opposing thinking between husband and wife had happened, followed by their separation.

There are both positive and negative impacts on this issue. First of all, by dint of escaping an unwanted living, every couple has a chance to find a better their half or at least they can have their own freedom to spend more time for work, to enhance their work. Moreover, Divorce is the best way to end people's unhappy marriages.

However, separation always is a cause which to lead to lack of education and nurture in children, to lure them into social evils. In 2000s period, the rate of divorce raised gradually, followed by an increase in criminals rate.

There are some solutions to this problem. The first solution is that society needs to prepare full necessary knowledge for their couple. Secondly, it is possible that people should have a stable finance before being marriage.

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