Undergraduate / MY ACADEMIC JOURNEY; SOP for UT [5]

This is long how many words?

Undergraduate / My goal was simple;reach the summit of Mountain Fansipan; SMU / Important Achievement [4]

I think you need to expand some more.

Undergraduate / Everyone needs a moment of clarification; UT- SOP [4]

Too long

Scholarship / Life is a cup of mysterious coffee; Significant experience [2]

Hello sorry is this for a blog or diary?

Writing Feedback / An Analysis of Outsourcing Information Systems [2]

monajha
Hi Monajha,

I am also new at this. Please run a spell check on your essay "21st centaury in America"