Posts by cahillcahill
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cahillcahill Sep 28, 2012
cahillcahill Sep 28, 2012
Undergraduate /
'standing at the podium' - UC: Prompt #2 [4]
Your essay is really wonderful and nice to read. The introduction and concluding paragraphs are really nice and clearly indicates that you want to express. There is nothing so that i can advice you. It is really great. Nice.
cahillcahill Sep 28, 2012
cahillcahill Sep 28, 2012
Undergraduate /
FSU College Essay - The Importance of Leadership [3]
You have mentioned some really good points. And you should make a little elaboration of about your role at Palmer Trinity School. Leadership is a quality that is indispensable to learning, service, and global awareness. These are some of the really good points that a common reader can easily catch. According to me you should make it a little enlarged, otherwise okay. Good luck!
cahillcahill Sep 28, 2012
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