Posts by hjkulik12

hjkulik12

Oct 12, 2012

Undergraduate / 'my English teacher' - Texas A&M - who has made an impact on your life [3]

Sounds great! I had an essay topic like this for Temple University and I was accepted and I think yours is better then mine. The biggest thing is to make sure everything is spelled right and the grammar is correct. I'm not good at either of those so my advice is to take it to a English teacher and have them check it. Good Luck!

hjkulik12

Oct 12, 2012

Undergraduate / 'hard work can pay off and be so rewarding' semester at sea entrance essay [4]

Thank you for the feed back I actually trashed that essay and started a new one I will be posting shortly. I know about the grammar that's the area I struggle in the most. Thank you and I hope you read my new one. I attached the new one to this post.

hjkulik12

Oct 9, 2012

Undergraduate / 'hard work can pay off and be so rewarding' semester at sea entrance essay [4]

This is all I have so far and I got completely stuck the prompt is "What are your academic goals, and how will Semester at Sea help you to you achieve them? Include at least two examples." This is my intro paragraph. Any ideas would help me to continue the essay it has to be 350-500 words.

I have always admired business men and women. My Dad owned his own company and I grew up spending a lot of time in his office at home. He showed me how hard work can pay off and be so rewarding. My Dad had a great amount of respect for every one of all ethnicities. He always told me there was never a reason to treat someone with disrespect. Because of my Dad I have set out on my college journey with my sights set on not only being a great business man, but a great person.