Writing Feedback / Fast food brings us more avails than drawbacks (IELTS task 2) [11]

Fast food results in many health issues like obesity, heart related disease etc. because of excess fat, cheese, oil and calorie involved. But the advantgae is that it saves time and available at cheaper rates!!

Have fast food once in a while, that is better!!

Undergraduate / "The Kind of People in My Life" - What matters to me Stanford [3]

Communicating with people in a convincing way is more important in our life...we have to deal and communicate with many people having various mentalities, it is must...the people those we welcome into our life truly matters....they should encourage us in each and every situation and must help us in reaching goals....!!

Undergraduate / Work for company or work in own business ? [3]

For few years we should work in the company so that we come to know how to manage a team, how to get profits and solve problems etc. then after we should start our own company....this is the best way to start our own company!!

Undergraduate / Would it be a bad idea to use this topic for Common App Essay #1 or #5? [7]

Whatever the topic you present it should be good and unique and must attract the readers. You can write about your hobbies...I think you can more effectively about this topic!!