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shiva11   
Nov 19, 2016
Writing Feedback / The rules, which were made by societies, pave the way to the next generations [2]

The rules that the whole societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict

In my childhood, using a video player or a CD player was offense and had a punishment in my home country. Whereas, nowadays, people have widespread access to various information sources, the internet, videos and so on. This is because of the rules changing between generations. Contrary to those who contend that today rules are rigid for the young people; I am of the opinion that laws are not hard. Leading young people to a right path and decrease the crime in the society are the main reasons why I hold this point of view.

The first point, which merits attention, would be that young people have a desire to experience everything and sometimes, it prompts them to the wrong way and poses a severe problem for them. I think laws and penalties are key factors for control the youth. In other words, severity is like a shake which warning people of an adverse effect of their behavior. As a result, rules enable young people to select the right path and behave in a mature way. A prime example from my brother experience may shed some light on this point when my brother was 15 years old he was punished because of smoking in the school. He should be worked in the library of the school throughout the summer. It seemed to be hard fine but helped my brother to give up the smoking forever.

There is also a more subtle point we must consider. Each society modifies the rules with regard to public health. It means all societies strive to reduce crimes and enhance life standards. When people accept the rules and obey them, the legislations change to culture and convey from one generation to another. As a result, rules play a productive role in establishing a regularity and discipline in the society. For instance, 10 years ago people encounter with the penalty for throw away a plastic trash in the street in Turkey country. People have followed this law and now a new generation has a positive attitude toward this, not as a rule but as a culture.

All in all, if all the factors are contemplated we can reach this conclusion that not only young people benefit from societies' rules and find out the ways to realize positive things from negative but also societies pave the way to next generations, because of correct the values and make civilization.
shiva11   
Nov 19, 2016
Writing Feedback / A comparison of source of energy to generate electricity in two different countries is shown [3]

A comparison of the source of energy to generate electricity in two different countries is shown in the pie charts between 1980 and 2010. Overall, coal has became the chief source for New Zealand in both years. Meanwhile, there was a change of base of electricity production in Germany from Natural Gas in 1980 to nuclear energy in 2010.

It could be seen that there were several changes in the usage of electricity source in New Zealand. To begin, Hydro increased slightly from 30 units in 1980 to 46 units in 2010. Besides, coal as the greatest number of the source of electricity over those years witnessed a significant incline by 94 units in 2010. In contrast, natural gas and petroleum experienced fall to a very small number, 2 units for each in 2010.

Another country, Germany experienced a dramatic increase of nuclear from 20 units to the highest number 155 and the riseing trend also happened in petroleum by 5 units in 2010. The rest of source electricity source units such as hydro and natural gas decreased to the same number only 2 units in 2010 while coal remained constant at 28 units in both years.
shiva11   
Nov 19, 2016
Writing Feedback / All university students should take basic science courses regardless of their field of study. [3]

We have entered an era where education systems are striving to adapt to the constant changes in the world. Contrary to those who contend that students should not take basic science courses in their field study; I am of the opinion that these courses should consider in all fields of study. The Strong connection between basic science and other fields of study and productive role of these courses on various aspects of life are the main reasons why I hold this point of view.

The first point worth mentioning would be that all fields of study are intimately linked to basic sciences. The importance of the fundamental science in all majors derives from the fact that all fields are dependent on this knowledge. In other words, taking background of basic sciences get a better understanding of other science and fields of study. Consequently, basic science education along with other courses is necessary. A prime example from my own experience may shed some lights on this point, I am a biochemist and I mostly deal with microorganisms and chemical compounds. High level of knowledge in basic science especially mathematic is indispensable in our career, because, the lowest mistake in the calculation of chemical materials dosage leads to destroying microorganisms.

There is also a more subtle point we must consider. Basic sciences play a crucial role in the people's daily tasks in their lives. Awareness of basic science enables us to realize how to tackle the problems in our lives and make an effort to resolve them. Because of this, the knowledge limitation of basic science would have a detrimental impact on life satisfaction. As a result, considering basic science courses in the university schedule for all students seems to have a positive influence on their life. For instance, my mother usages her chemical science knowledge in the cooking to enhance the nutritional value of foods. In the other hand, she can benefit from mathematic science to reduce the financial risk with accurate calculation.

All in all, if all the factors are contemplated we can reach this conclusion that basic science has not only a beneficial effect on the realization of other science but also can be considered as a key factor in fulfillment of life and cope with hardships. Hence, the importance of basic science education cannot be underestimated in the university curriculum.
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