Posts by Albert

Albert

Dec 14, 2012

Undergraduate / Being a devote Justin Bieber fan! NYU supplement [8]

Please don't write about Justin Bieber! Everyone hates him especially the NYU admission officers and he's gay!

Albert

Dec 11, 2012

Undergraduate / Academic interests/ What intrigues you?: NYU Supplements! [4]

In the second part:

Google, Netflix, Facebook, music, emails, CNN, and The Common App too

^this isn't a complete sentence and therefore it is not grammatically correct. Secondly, music and emails are not websites. So you might have to correct that. But it's a pretty good essay, the best I've seen so far. I'm also applying to NYUAD so goodluck with your application.

Albert

Nov 26, 2012

Essays / How to start an essay "why do people attend college or university?" [7]

It's really hard to do so with so little characters. I'd be really grateful if you could help me write it.

Albert

Nov 21, 2012

Undergraduate / 'the gravity of challenges' - Bentley University Supplement Essay [5]

Ok. I'll do that but it's just 800 characters. I can't really say much with 800 characters.

Albert

Nov 20, 2012

Undergraduate / 'the gravity of challenges' - Bentley University Supplement Essay [5]

:O A functioning? I'm new on here. And my essay writing skills are really not the best.

Albert

Nov 20, 2012

Undergraduate / 'the gravity of challenges' - Bentley University Supplement Essay [5]

If you could change one thing about your high school career, what would it be?

If I could change something about my high school career, it would be the GCE A'level subjects I studied: Mathematics,Economics & Business Studies. I'm very passionate about each of these subjects because of their appeal and application in my everyday routines. I employ them so often that they have become part and parcel of me, meanwhile, I like challenges. Repetition wears off the gravity of challenges. I would therefore want to study more challenging subjects such as Physics, Chemistry and Further Mathematics. These subjects would demand more from me and therefore push me to my capacity and stimulate my inner genius to surface. Also, it was my childhood dream to become a scientist like my name sake 'Albert' Einstein. These GCE A'level subjects would have made my childhood dream a reality.

Please help edit this essay. Thank you.

Albert

Nov 20, 2012

Undergraduate / Trying to create a strong, unique FIT application essay!? [2]

FIT? Florida Institute of Technology?

Albert

Nov 20, 2012

Essays / How to start an essay "why do people attend college or university?" [7]

'Interest through a friend' - Drake University Supplement Essay

Describe how you first came to be interested in attending Drake University? [300 characters]

I first became interested in Drake University through a friend who had earlier applied. He was optimistic about getting into Drake but unfortunately couldn't enroll due to insufficient funds. He constantly passed positive comments about Drake and this heightened my interest in Drake.

Please help.