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Jan 24, 2013
Undergraduate / I want to become a TROJAN; PR STATEMENT OF INTENT-USC! [11]

Thanks so much for your feedback!

The essay prompt is as follows:

All applicants to Broadcast and Digital Journalism, Print and Digital Journalism, or Public Relations majors must submit a one-page Statement of Intent, explaining their reasons for pursuing an education and career in journalism or public relations.
ag1127   
Jan 23, 2013
Undergraduate / I want to become a TROJAN; PR STATEMENT OF INTENT-USC! [11]

Here is my rough draft! I know there are some errors but I wouldn't mind them being pointed out! Please help me proofread it I am really trying to make it interesting so I can get accepted. Thanks!

When most people ask me where I see myself in the next 10 years I often respond by saying working as an A&R executive or owning my own PR company. When asked why I chose these careers? I simply say because I have always had a passion for media and entertainment.

My chatty and outgoing personality has always provided me with ample recognition. It has also given me the ability to contribute to my potential career. Ever since I was a little girl, music would put me in a happy place and would inspire me to be more creative. Even during a young age, watching Britney Spears preform her first hits would make me think of how exhilarating it would be to manage or be a part of an artists' team. Researching and finding new music has always appealed to me. One of my favorite hobbies is to discover new artists by attending random shows across Los Angeles. To be able to think that one day I would be able to scout artists or manage their publicity as a career would be a dream come true. My wide range of taste is what would make me most capable of starting my own record label or PR company!

While browsing through the Annenberg website I felt a sudden boost in my confidence. Looking through the alumnis current careers as well as noticing prestigious companies like Warner Bros., Sony, and E Entertainment made me realize the amount of opulence the school has to offer. During my time in college, I would love to continue to intern for multiple companies. I am positive that USC would open many doors and provide me with great options to choose from. In addition to being involved with internships as an extracurricular, I would also like to contribute to the reputable Annenberg TV News and TriSight Communications. Working for the school organized firm would enable me to expand my knowledge on public relations as well as broaden my communication skills. Nonetheless, it would provide me with insight on the day to day basis of the career that I am choosing.

The diversity of USC would offer me new opportunities. The detailed courses in communications would further my skills and capabilities. During my time at Warner Brothers Records one of my supervisors and USC alumni, Roderick Scott, explained to me all the great opportunities USC had presented him with. All USC alumni I have met constantly praise the school for its engaging and entertainment enriched classes. These examples of USC alumni have further more motivated me to become a Trojan. Watching their success and seeing how the school had well prepared them for their career has made USC appeal to me even more! I have always been aware of the great courses taught by USC and as I grew older and more stable in what career path I choose, USC has only further captivated me . Not only would I be thrilled at the concept of being a Trojan, but I would also further my knowledge. The ability to be involved in such a prestigious student body would be challenging and valued.
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