reymiii
Dec 12, 2012
Undergraduate / Common app essay: Indicate a person who has had a significant influence. True Friend [8]
I like it a lot. Though you say you can't remember what year you met him but then you mention your exact age. It's a little distracting.
The "one hell of an ugly kid" is humorous and I enjoy it but some colleges really shy away from any kind of "cursing."
I like it a lot. Though you say you can't remember what year you met him but then you mention your exact age. It's a little distracting.
The "one hell of an ugly kid" is humorous and I enjoy it but some colleges really shy away from any kind of "cursing."