GirlNextDoor
Dec 23, 2012
Undergraduate / Since it looks like we'll be living together, we'll get to know a lot about each other! My roommate. [2]
Ah I just finished this one also!
Overall I liked your essay. I think the way you wrote your essay goes perfectly with what you are actually saying in it. I can tell that you are a very bubbly, and almost always happy person! I liked it but maybe add more about you and what you value if you aren't too close to your character limit. I read something that said that it isn't just about telling your hobbies and what you like- its about conveying who you are and what you value. But I actually really liked it and I loved how the way you wrote matched what you saying, so well done! And good luck!! :)
Ah I just finished this one also!
Overall I liked your essay. I think the way you wrote your essay goes perfectly with what you are actually saying in it. I can tell that you are a very bubbly, and almost always happy person! I liked it but maybe add more about you and what you value if you aren't too close to your character limit. I read something that said that it isn't just about telling your hobbies and what you like- its about conveying who you are and what you value. But I actually really liked it and I loved how the way you wrote matched what you saying, so well done! And good luck!! :)