xxxrays
Dec 19, 2012
Undergraduate / I was seduced by the beauty of the city; NYU Supp/ Why NYU? [9]
I feel silly. But here's the revised one:
Neck craning just enough to allow the small tips of my hair to kiss my eyelids, eyes flicking rapidly between the beautifully intimidating historic cement and mortar, and pupils widening ever so slightly to take in the vast and absolute wonder that is New York City as I take solid, measured steps across the battered walkway. I am careful not to miss a single thing while maneuvering through the rushing crowds. The light dances between the windowpanes at every angle, sparkling brilliantly as if it knows just how to embody the life of this thriving metropolis. The entire city is a masterpiece fashioned with the boldest of colors, and I, like so many others before me, was seduced by the beauty. - Sophia Steiner
I feel that there's enough to be inferred here!
What do you think?
I feel silly. But here's the revised one:
Neck craning just enough to allow the small tips of my hair to kiss my eyelids, eyes flicking rapidly between the beautifully intimidating historic cement and mortar, and pupils widening ever so slightly to take in the vast and absolute wonder that is New York City as I take solid, measured steps across the battered walkway. I am careful not to miss a single thing while maneuvering through the rushing crowds. The light dances between the windowpanes at every angle, sparkling brilliantly as if it knows just how to embody the life of this thriving metropolis. The entire city is a masterpiece fashioned with the boldest of colors, and I, like so many others before me, was seduced by the beauty. - Sophia Steiner
I feel that there's enough to be inferred here!
What do you think?