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Posts by MyMichael
Joined: Dec 25, 2012
Last Post: Dec 27, 2012
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MyMichael   
Dec 27, 2012
Undergraduate / Competitive World; MIT essay _ Describe the world you come from [5]

"always pushed me to head the top."
This might sound a bit like "My parents told me to do it - I hated it - but I eventually did it, then."

You could write "my parents always supported me," that is more positive I think.

epitomize -> embody (using simpler words often makes a better impress, even if you might think the opposite does, as it is easier to read)

no matter how impossible they seem to fulfillbe.

I would revise the last sentence, because it is tad checked off (therefore hard to read and comprehend) and has a little tip of being arrogant ("I will [...] invent a revolutionary machine in a few days").
MyMichael   
Dec 26, 2012
Writing Feedback / Changed from being a loner [3]

Talking about "being a loner" is a topic that is very.. ambivalent (also, if it *was* in the past, and you now are the most social guy in the world).

You chose a very difficult topic and have to decide if you want to risk it. The reaction-scale is unlimited, it might go from "we don't want a loner or any kind of one on this school" to "he was accepting (and has actually mastered) one of the most difficult challenges of all. This is exactly the kind of person we seek. Admitted."
MyMichael   
Dec 25, 2012
Undergraduate / I made my first 125-miles trip to Munich. ; MIT App; Significant challenge [5]

There is indeed something true to your comment. What I want to show with this story (which really had an impact on my life: it seemed like a hundred shattering events at once, and if you think it can't come worse.. yeah, you know the rest) is that I have the tranquility and openness (to people, the fear to ask) that was required to get along.

Can you give me a hint in what "kind of direction" / "greater focus" this essay should go to reveal more about myself, as you say?
MyMichael   
Dec 25, 2012
Undergraduate / Android apps / Computers / OS / PolyThinker - Polytechnic Institute of NY University [4]

Please list any activities related to invention, technological innovation, innovative business plans, or creative accomplishment in the arts, aside from those you may have listed on the Common Application.

After I founded the company "Troubi Entertainment" there was a lot to discover. We are publishing our own apps for Android (iOS and Windows Phone are planned as well) and create websites. Working in a team and coordinating the time-tables was one of the major difficulties at the beginning, but we finally solved it by using fix meeting times (often via Skype) and by using Google Drive-Documents. I invite you to test all the Android apps I have made.

Why do you want to attend NYU-Poly?
I believe in computer science and its future, and I know that the NYU is an innovative university at which I am able to achieve my goals and realize my ideas. The NYU has a great focus on science and engineering - exactly what I want. Chances are high for me to find like-minded people and make them my friends and hopefully collaborate with them in the future.

Besides of that it fulfills all location aspects I have set to myself: near the east coast and in a large city.

Tell us why you selected your major or your area of interest.
I am totally in love with computer science. I spend a lot of time coding and I also try to understand the underlying concepts by reading comprehensive books. The last one I bought was "Modern Operating Systems." Virtually everything computer-science related fascinates me, but I find low-level concepts (OpenGL, operating systems, the C and assembly language) most interesting. I think science and art should not be separated, which is why I want to take design (-related) lectures.

How are you a 'PolyThinker'?
I truly believe that I am a PolyThinker in the way that I do not see things from only one perspective. Referring to my future major, I think that "science" does not captures all aspects of computer science, because there is also some "art" to it. Programs should perform fast *and* be user-friendly. It should be clear what is happening behind the scenes without annoying or irritating the user. Navigation needs to be clear and self-explanatory. I try to apply this ideology to most things I do.

If you could spend one day in New York City with a famous inventor, who would you like it to be, where would you go, and why?

My choice would fall to Andrew S. Tanenbaum. I have already read some of his books and they totally amazed me. In my eyes, he is a genius. Pondering with him on operating systems, programming languages and all the underlying theory is a real dream. I believe that I can learn a lot from him and I would be glad if I could also tell him something new he was not aware of, ye. It would not matter where we would go, maybe to the Central Park or a restaurant, it just has to be comfortable and calm.
MyMichael   
Dec 25, 2012
Graduate / Speech pathology; Grad School App /communication disorders and sciences [2]

It would be interesting *how* old you were, because it seems that it wasn't *too* much about yourself.
Admission counselors typically want to know how you are *now* (and not 15 years ago, for instance).

I think you need a topic where you (!!!) did something *amazing* or *extraordinary*. Many (well, yeah) kids probably attend such "courses" if they have problems in pronunciation when they are young.

It shows that your kindergarden-teacher and your parents are very thoughtful and considerate (because they obviously quickly perceived what was going on and took action), but it doesn't reveal much about you yourself.
MyMichael   
Dec 25, 2012
Undergraduate / "Sit still; MIT optional and common app essay [2]

I think it is great. I like the "I've found what I love" idea. This is very important and I am also happy for you that you have found it :).
MyMichael   
Dec 25, 2012
Undergraduate / I made my first 125-miles trip to Munich. ; MIT App; Significant challenge [5]

The following essay contains 407 words, but it is only allowed to have 200-250 words. Do you think it's possible to put the entire text in the "What else do you want us to know"-box and make a link to there in the "challenge" box. I think it is hard to tell the entire

story in just 250 words.
By the way, I am from Germany. (if it matters somehow :) )

Q: Tell us about the most significant challenge you've faced or something important that didn't go according to plan. How did you manage the situation?(*) (200-250 words)

A: This summer, only a few weeks after receiving my driver's license, I made my first 125-miles trip to Munich.
I was going to take the SAT II Math and Physics there. I arrived the day before the test on a hotel that is close to the testing center, as I didn't want to get up at five and spend the following two and a half hours by driving.

At the same day I arrived, I checked in and wanted to visit the actual testing location to be prepared for the following morning. I didn't intend to rush in the morning. I wanted to find the way easily and quickly.

But I realized there was one big problem: the direct way over the autobahn was redirected over many small villages.
I strayed around asking various people if they knew the testing center or at least the city it was in. Everybody knew something that was completely different from what everyone else said. It was confusing. So it slowly went dark and I became a little more nervous, because I couldn't see much anymore.

My car and me within were floating in the air, then we crashed onto the ground. What was that? I just flew over the end of the street. I were in midst of a construction site of a new autobahn, surrounded by woods. It was probably the one that was blocked. I felt totally lost and alone. I said "calm down," and drove to the next village. I tried not to look too suspicious (since it already was 9:00 pm!), rang on a doorbell and could finally convince the chosen one to sit next to me in car and help me find the way. This person was my hero and we quickly found it.

I came home at 10 and everything I desired was hearing my mom's voice, so I called her. I didn't understand a single sentence, as the connection was very bad, but it didn't matter to me. I went to sleep but repeatedly awoke between 2 and 4 am. It was Oktoberfest-time and the first visitors were coming home. Loud and drunk. I awoke the last time at 5:30 am. and in spite of all the crazy events within the last 12 hours I felt well rested and ready for the exam.

In broad daylight I could find the building rather quickly and successfully made the test. What an adventure.
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