Chaz
Jan 21, 2013
Chaz
Jan 10, 2013
Writing Feedback / Cleaning is the most important job in my city [8]
A clean up the city. B build more bicycle trails. C plant more trees. Explain why.
Its a SPEAKING test which I wrote a draft.
I will definitely go for the cleaning job.
First of all, cleanness matters a lot with people's health.If the hygiene of our living area is bad, we ll get some health problems. For example, if the air which we breath every moment is polluted, it will be much easier for us to be infected by the dusty air which will probably lead to serious illness. So we need to clean up the city to live a healthy life.
Secondly, a clean environment gives a good feeling of living. Nothing can be more unpleasant than dirt like stinky trash, smoky air and dusty cars.We have to clean up those dirt to live a better life.
That's why I would like to do the cleaning job.
A clean up the city. B build more bicycle trails. C plant more trees. Explain why.
Its a SPEAKING test which I wrote a draft.
I will definitely go for the cleaning job.
First of all, cleanness matters a lot with people's health.If the hygiene of our living area is bad, we ll get some health problems. For example, if the air which we breath every moment is polluted, it will be much easier for us to be infected by the dusty air which will probably lead to serious illness. So we need to clean up the city to live a healthy life.
Secondly, a clean environment gives a good feeling of living. Nothing can be more unpleasant than dirt like stinky trash, smoky air and dusty cars.We have to clean up those dirt to live a better life.
That's why I would like to do the cleaning job.
Chaz
Jan 9, 2013
Writing Feedback / Vacation can be boring, more complicated and less sophisticated without friends [3]
Thank you for correcting.
How about my other paragraphs? Are they written well?
Thank you for correcting.
How about my other paragraphs? Are they written well?
Chaz
Jan 8, 2013
Writing Feedback / Vacation can be boring, more complicated and less sophisticated without friends [3]
Which of the following three factors contributes to an enjoyable vacation most? A. good food B. good location C. good friends with you.
Could anyone do me a favor to fix it? Thank you.
Having an enjoyable holiday plays an essential part, especially after a long-termed hard work, in people's life. Various factors,like good food ,location or friends, have been
contributed to a joyful vacation. Although some people consider majorly on food and place, I hold the perspective that goods friends are necessary.
First and foremost, friends can definitely make a vacation more fun by planning and doing activities together, sharing interesting stories. For example, you can spend a day trip with friends to hike mountain ,have picnic, have nice conversation. It can be quite boring to spend vacation time alone even if an exquisite landscape and some appealing food were provided. Image that you would like to chat with someone about the scene and the taste of food, immediately the feeling of loneliness and emptiness will arise from your inward as nobody you can address to. Consequently, having vacation with friends really makes more fun.
Secondly, vacation can be easier with good friends since they can take care of you ,even rescue you from a trouble. Once I had a cycling trip with my friend, on the way to a destination, I had to halt in the middle of nowhere since my tyres were worn-out ,even worse, I have no clue how to fix the broken piece, but he repaired my bike immediately with his skillful technique. After, I was really relieved and appreciated.
Finally, with a knowledgeable friend, you can absolutely acquire a lot. He can give you interesting ideas like where to visit, what kind of things you can do and how to realize the plan. With these appealing ideas ,you can make a plan first and have an expectation which will lead you further to conduct more research from which your knowledgeable will be enlarged by a significant margin. After you put so much effort on that idea, it will ultimately move you to experience it,which will make you learn extra. Your knowledge is like a snowball acquiring gradually in the process of moving.
All in all, vacation can be boring ,more complicated and less sophisticated without friends. Therefore,it is essential to have at least one good friend accompanied to enjoy your holiday.
Which of the following three factors contributes to an enjoyable vacation most? A. good food B. good location C. good friends with you.
Could anyone do me a favor to fix it? Thank you.
Having an enjoyable holiday plays an essential part, especially after a long-termed hard work, in people's life. Various factors,like good food ,location or friends, have been
contributed to a joyful vacation. Although some people consider majorly on food and place, I hold the perspective that goods friends are necessary.
First and foremost, friends can definitely make a vacation more fun by planning and doing activities together, sharing interesting stories. For example, you can spend a day trip with friends to hike mountain ,have picnic, have nice conversation. It can be quite boring to spend vacation time alone even if an exquisite landscape and some appealing food were provided. Image that you would like to chat with someone about the scene and the taste of food, immediately the feeling of loneliness and emptiness will arise from your inward as nobody you can address to. Consequently, having vacation with friends really makes more fun.
Secondly, vacation can be easier with good friends since they can take care of you ,even rescue you from a trouble. Once I had a cycling trip with my friend, on the way to a destination, I had to halt in the middle of nowhere since my tyres were worn-out ,even worse, I have no clue how to fix the broken piece, but he repaired my bike immediately with his skillful technique. After, I was really relieved and appreciated.
Finally, with a knowledgeable friend, you can absolutely acquire a lot. He can give you interesting ideas like where to visit, what kind of things you can do and how to realize the plan. With these appealing ideas ,you can make a plan first and have an expectation which will lead you further to conduct more research from which your knowledgeable will be enlarged by a significant margin. After you put so much effort on that idea, it will ultimately move you to experience it,which will make you learn extra. Your knowledge is like a snowball acquiring gradually in the process of moving.
All in all, vacation can be boring ,more complicated and less sophisticated without friends. Therefore,it is essential to have at least one good friend accompanied to enjoy your holiday.