Posts by mmgay
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Last Post: Jan 21, 2013
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Traveling around China inspires me ; Wisconsin-Madison Why Engineering? [4]
repetition of mind
But appreciating the miracle and beauty of mother-nature in Tibetan brought an idea in my mind to connect the Tibet with outer world by building a railway. I developed an ambition to work as an engineer.
This can be childish. But traveling around China inspires me to study hard.
It may sound childish but exploring my motherland, I found inspiration to work hard to be able to do something for it.
Studying in University of Wisconsin-Madison fulfilled my commitments to get involved in engineering. More importantly, it gives an opportunity for me to make a magnificent life in the future.
use future tense instead of past
Undergraduate /
"Love at First Sight" : Why Colorado College? [5]
I completely agree with that, and feel the same way about Colorado College. My first impression was when a friend, who had just applied, recommended it to me.
this seems awkward ..you may say: I felt the same until I encountered the breathtaking picture of the scenic Rocky Mountain backdrop of the campus
and I would suggest you to mention full name or just Colorado instead of CC.
Undergraduate /
History of Science Fiction; Colorado C- Intellectual Adventure [5]
I dont know alot about science fiction but I guess you have pretty good idea about it and it can be seen
I also agree with jingjingjing that the college doesnt want you to write a course catalog but is more interested in knowing more about you through the question so may mention what you hope to achieve from the course and how this course will benefit you.
here
Students will study
I think its much better to use first person instead of third one .. :)
Undergraduate /
Hall of fame by "The Script"; SMITH - Theme song that describes me [6]
Applying to college can be serious business; yet we're eager to get to know you in a less formal way. Have fun answering the following question: If you had a theme song - a piece of music that describes you best - what would it be and why? Please include the name of the song and the artist. (Limit response to 150 words) characters 1000
Hall of fame by 'The Script' is my favorite song. I first heard the song when one of my friends shared it on facebook and since then I have fallen in love with it. I am inspired by Paulo Coelho words that when a person really desires something, the entire universe conspires to help that person to realize his dream and for me the song reinforces the same idea. I would not brag that this song has inspired me to make impossible things happen in my life but it has strengthened my belief in myself and gives me the energy, the encouragement to work towards my goal in life. Whenever I break down or think of giving up listening to the song gives me strength to move on. If I had a theme song it would probably be this song.
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