Undergraduate /
Sweden/Holland, The South, Nowhere ;300 wrds, "Where are you from?" Kenyon [8]
well, it seems to me that there 's no problem with your essay's content . i'm not sure that i'm true but the following is my opinion :
-firstly :i think , instead of saying (When someone looks at me, they cannot easily say, "Oh, certainly you're from 'this country")why dont you say (when someone looks at me , they can easily say ," you 're not from this country ,arent you ?) because i've never heard anyone say that :p
-secondly , i think ,the sentence "However, it is the ambiguity of where I am from that has led me to deeply investigate my history " must be "However, it is the ambiguity of where I am from that has led me to deeply investigating my history "next "I never fail to ask my grandmother all about her Swedish mother and father " why dont you replace Swedish mother and father by Swedish parent .it help you avoid repeating .
that 's all ,i hope it can help you ^^
