Posts by skg94

skg94

Feb 2, 2013

Undergraduate / Essay - Thoughts on thesis? - essay for Shakespeare (UAS) class [10]

I will try! im sure you noticed but you forgot an apostrophe in In William Shakespeare's "Othello",

skg94

Feb 2, 2013

Undergraduate / Chartered Accountant - Schulich School-Business Admin [9]

Since its only 250 words, i would say you dont need to but you can if you want to, does it have a character limit, like 1950 characters or something like that?

But, you will most likley be talking about one or two qualities that should technically be in the same paragraph but you can split up different qualities if you please, but this is a little consuming because you have to restart your topic and such, if you lose format and just start writing thinking it connects will be a huge error.

skg94

Feb 2, 2013

Undergraduate / Essay - Thoughts on thesis? - essay for Shakespeare (UAS) class [10]

Well im still in high school as well and to my grade's standard (12) that would probably only get like 7-8/10 on thought and understanding (thesis) but that is still good nonetheless. Depends really on how you expand it in your body paragraphs. I did the best in my Othello essay, a perfect score so this is one topic i could help you out on.

Also i ment get rid of "such" so it is just Iago is an effective manipulator

skg94

Feb 2, 2013

Undergraduate / Essay - Thoughts on thesis? - essay for Shakespeare (UAS) class [10]

Kind of stating the obvious if you ask me but i dont see any obvious faults,

i would get rid of "such an" in "such an effective manipulator"

skg94

Feb 2, 2013

Undergraduate / Chartered Accountant - Schulich School-Business Admin [9]

the only thing i would change is your last sentence, you should avoid cliche, also you might want to add certain specific aspects about Schulich that makes it stand out from the other schools (without naming them), for example if they had small classes talk about how how those small classes, private interaction with professors and how it meets your goals & development of character. Your paragraph is well thought out and written well, but try to be a bit more specific give an example of an attribute that Schulich possesses and how it relates to your goals.

skg94

Jan 30, 2013

Undergraduate / University of Toronto SAF - Questions - Management - Accounting Co-op. [7]

My love for mathematics has enhanced my ability to thoroughly analyze and solve problems. It has also taught me to analyze any challenges thoughtfully and to be persistent in the search for a solution. My persistence has enabled me to become a better leader and has developed my verbal and written communication skills. Also, my experiences as an international student gave me the unique opportunity to learn how to adapt to different cultures and social groups. In pursuit of this I became extremely social and encouraged me to always welcome a challenge and be persistent in all of my goals.

How is this one? Worse, better, the same?

For the skills and experience question.

skg94

Jan 30, 2013

Undergraduate / University of Toronto SAF - Questions - Management - Accounting Co-op. [7]

that is true, what kind of skills should i mention i was also told to consider these paragraphs almost like a resume, almost exaggerating your skills. But what kind of skills can i put in an eloquent paragraph? Skills ive learned in school ,like strong problem solving, analytical, communication - diverse multicultural as well as second language ? - and i like to be challenged maybe? That was what i was trying to pull off maybe it just wasnt clear or doesnt fit the bill

skg94

Jan 29, 2013

Undergraduate / University of Toronto SAF - Questions - Management - Accounting Co-op. [7]

it is management and accounting with economy so i should be more specific, say that i can communicate with different cultures, my teacher told me uni love people who have multi cultural perspectives. Im not too sure what to do though. More examples? but 100 words is so small. I havent had any managerial experiences, so what talk about a manager ive learned from?

How about the rest are they alright? grammar mistakes?

skg94

Jan 29, 2013

Undergraduate / University of Toronto SAF - Questions - Management - Accounting Co-op. [7]

This is what i wrote, for my last question.

I am skilled at presenting my thoughts and opinion efficiently while accurately expressing my emotions, but my writing can be colloquial. This was brought to my attention when my teacher told me to write more concisely in my essays. I worked at improving my thesis writing and formatting my paragraphs. In pursuit of this I learned how to effectively format my sentences and paragraphs so that my ideas are clear and succinct. This improved the fluidity of my writing and my oral communication skills as I am now able to apply profound and descriptive vocabulary to my speech.

skg94

Jan 29, 2013

Undergraduate / University of Toronto SAF - Questions - Management - Accounting Co-op. [7]

Do you think these are good enough, too vague, poor vocabulary, grammar, doesnt relate to the topic/my subject of choice?

*What experiences and skills might you bring to this field? (100 words or less)
I have the advantage of being an international student; I had the unique opportunity to adapt a whole new culture, combined with my native culture and language, and which gave me various different perspectives. This provided me unique challenges throughout my life; I had to battle through the racial prejudice that was placed upon me. For example, my English writing and speaking skills were always questioned; I was determined to prove them wrong. These challenges made me self-motivated, competitive, and persistent in all my goals. I became opportunistic, always looking for the benefits in challenges as well as welcoming them.

*Why are you interested in this program? (100 words or less)
UTSC offers a strong network of academic excellence and business connections, in the business centre of Canada. Co-op offers the best combination of multi-cultural communities, academics, business networks, and challenges that will set the foundations for my future. I wish to be in a diverse community, where I can interact with students from different cultures, and discover new challenges and values. Co-op, not only offers all these traits, but offers me the opportunity to develop my skills as a leader and I believe this program is my first step to future success in the field of business.

*What is your favourite subject and why? (100 words or less)
According to Plato, "The highest form of pure thought is in mathematics." Mathematics is vast and its application limitless, but, the complexity and analytical aspects are what interest me the most. The intricate problem solving concepts and skills needed to solve just one math problem is always challenging. Also math is a language that every culture can understand and communicate through regardless of their country. Everything connects in mathematics, a relationship, and it feels complete. When I am challenged by a mathematically problem, I know that it can be solved, and this motivates me to persistently attempt to solve it.

*Please describe your writing and communication skills, indicating particular strengths or weaknesses (100 words or less):

What should i write about? , I was going to say that i can communicate with other cultures, i know a second language, and my skills are being able to efficiently communicate my thoughts and emotions. I was going to treat it like a resume, listing my accomplishments and my weakness and how i have made progress, my example being i was unable to write a clear and concise thesis in an essay but now i am able to efficiently express my opinions. What are your thoughts.