Posts by UMK
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"Why do you slay the righteous?"/ Narrative Essay - Story or Narration? [13]
Completed Narrative Essay ( Please Evaluate)My narrative essay is now complete, I previously posted the first paragraph of this essay and now I am finally done. Constructive critisism is welcome. Thanks :)
Editing to remove some portions and it should be up again, sorry.
Graduate /
Admission Form - General Admission Questions [6]
"I came to a junction in my career voyage, this course will provide me enough strength to choose the right way. I
have posses
more than one year over a year of industrial experience in IT Industry"
Edit: Try to avoid beginning to answer the question with " I need ".
Undergraduate /
essay on the topic "who i am"? [7]
It should be more than just about your physical capabilites, tanglible properties and such. Look into it spiritually and implement more of a metaphoric feeling to it as well. You might want to look into the fact that you might be an inspiration or role model to another individual in your life, perhaps a younger relative or sibling.
Essays /
"Why do you slay the righteous?"/ Narrative Essay - Story or Narration? [13]
Ill probably write it in the first person from the protagonists " friend's " point of view. Im feeling that should be sufficient and it should achieve a desired effect. Ill post the whole essay when its done, im aiming for no more than 1000 words. Thanks for the input, its been extremely helpful :) I also have a good feeling about the insight portion in the final paragraph and how ill sum it up together.
Essays /
"Why do you slay the righteous?"/ Narrative Essay - Story or Narration? [13]
( Assignment : write a narrative essay) Im in Grade 12 and I was wondering a few things about how to incorporate someones point of view into my essay. My question is : does a narrative essay have to be from someones point of view or could it just be "story telling" via basic narration? Im not too proficient with narratives, im more into writing expository essays. My paper is due at the end of spring break and im hoping to improve it a lot. Its in the process of being completed and ill post the first paragraph if it helps. The story is ficitonal and any constructive criticism is highly appreciated. Also please tell me what I could do better and what I did well.
"Why do you slay the righteous?" the man bellowed. Because I crucify my advarsaries mercilessly, and defy those who challenge my validity" a sadistic male voice replied. The tone of his voice was firm yet indicated solemnity. The store owners lifeless corpse lay motionless and pallid. A deep maroon stain expanded as blood depleted from its source, his conglomorate flesh and bones. A man of immense stature, scars littered his face, as if it was once rubber and someone had engraved sketchy lines within it. A serpent caressed the leathery hide that embraced his robust shoulders. He roamed the land seeking wealth and pleasure, he would eliminate any who opposed him. Determined to fullfill the luxurious fantasy that infected his brain. He would venture out on a daily basis, comitting crimes and sinister deeds to satisfy his greed. A feeble minded young man with infinite potential, which was spent and faded away on his negative decisions. His intentions were a spitting relection of his actions.
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