UrUltimateGuy
Jun 10, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS: Is it fair that sportmen earn far more money than doctors and teachers? [5]
Well, to my idea about your writing is that you should have a better introduction (the one you wrote sounds too simple). And in the body, you should add extra examples.
Well, to my idea about your writing is that you should have a better introduction (the one you wrote sounds too simple). And in the body, you should add extra examples.