Writing Feedback / [IELTS] CAM9 - WRITING TASK 1 - REPORT AN ISLAND BEFORE AND AFTER CONSTRUCTION [3]

TASK 1

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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ANSWER:

The two maps show the growth of an island before and after the construction for tourism.

It is clear that significant changes are made in terms of constructing new facilities like accommodation, the transport infrastructure and the use of the sea.

Looking at the first picture, we can see that there is a huge land surrounded by sea on all sides. The island is about 250 meters in length, with only trees in the west and the east. A large beach located on the western side is not used for any purpose.

By contrast, the second map describes the island after building a lot of tourist facilities. In the middle of the island, there is a reception block which is surrounded by a vehicle track that leads to the restaurant in the north. On the other side, the track also runs to the pier in the south sea of the island where tourists can go sailing. In the west and the east, many mushroom houses, which are connected by footpath, are built to accommodate guests. Furthermore, the beach now being used for swimming can be reached from the western accommodation through the footpath.

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Writing Feedback / IELTS - Report an island before and after construction [5]

TOPIC: (Cam 9, Test 1 Part 1)
The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where revelents.

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ANSWER:

The two maps illustrate the change of an island over years because of the development for tourism. Overall, the island experienced significant changes with the build of many facilities.

To begin with, the first map describes the land before construction with only trees in the east and the west of the land. The huge land is about 250 metres with the large beach in the west.

Moving on to the second map after construction, we can see a lot of facilities were built in the island. First of all, buildings were raised in two areas of the land. While some mushroom houses are in the centre of the land, the others are near the beach in the west. Footpaths were also constructed around accommodation units for tourist walking and that of western area leads to the beach for swimming. Between two accommodation areas, there are a big restaurant and a reception hall. A vehicle track surrounds the hall and reach to the pier where people can go sailing in the south sea of the island.