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Jun 21, 2013
Writing Feedback / Human activity is harmful to the existance of earth; what's your opinion? [5]

Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Ithers feel that human activity makes the earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Earth is homeland for humankind. Therefore, people should take care of it. But nowadays I see another picture. Huge amount of pollution of greenhouse gases, chemicals producing, water contamination are seems to be an opposite. So, I think people have to decrease the harmful influence on Earth.

Human activity increased the level of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere. Consequenly, global warming recently became more threatening. The best example is how rapidly glaciers are melting year by year. Therefore, sea level is rising and starting to flood inhabitable areas every season as an implication of human activity. I think it is a paradox, that people are suffered by themselves because of the development their activities.

Also, the human activity can harm people all over the world. The powerful example for this trend is Chernobyl disaster. I'm living in Ukraine, 200 km from Chernobyl. My parents were influenced by this catastrophic event and even now they remember it as the most memorable disaster that happened over 20 years ago. Besides, many other people in different countries were suffered by this disaster. So, I thinik this strong accident is a great example of how human activity can be harmful.

The development of human activity has an impact on different species of animals. For example, many species in Africa confused because they used to migrate in the same time every year in seeking of water. But, because of the temperature rising, dry season is much longer now. It was not a problem 30 years ago, but nowadays it seems to be. Elephants can't satisfied their needs of water and many of them are dying. This situation related not only to elephants but for other species too.

Hence, despite all the privileges of human activity, how they can make our life easier, I still feel confident about the harmful and destructive impact on Earth by human activity. Humankind have to change the way they live and exist in this world in order to save the planet.
kvant   
Jun 18, 2013
Writing Feedback / I'll move; my city is not capable to provide job vacancies for young specialists [7]

Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.

I think its difficult to say what is better, to stay in one place or go to another one. It depends on what character person has, what goals he pursue in life. I'm a young person, consequently, I have an abundance of energy that I don't know how to manage with. Therefore, the best option for me is go to different places in order to find various opportunities to made myself. The reasons for my choice is listed below.

Firstly, my city is not capable to provide job vacancies for young specialists. Therefore, graduates attempt to find different ways for realize themselves somehow, and, gradually, they leave their native places in order to search the better conditions of living. This situation related not only to cities but to another countries. In addition, my field of study is not very developed in my country, so this is reason why I intend to move to another country to increase and update my knowledge.

Secondly, despite job problems, going from one place to another one is great chance to meet more interesting people and even make good friends. I remember my trip to USA and in the beginning I didn't know how people will treat me. So, it was a great surprise when I realize that community accepted me in very good way. After two years since I last time was in USA, we still in touch. So, this changing of place, gave me opportunity to enhance my contacts.

Thirdly, I believe that more you see then more you live. So, when you change places you explore to yourself new experience, discover a new way of living. Therefore, you trying to adapt yourself for absolutely new conditions which is good, because it would be useful for you in the future, especially for young people like me.

Summarizing all the above, If you are not satisfied with conditions of your recent place, don't waste your time to endure this, you have to fix your situation. In addition, going from one place to another is a chance to find yourself in this world and do what you truly want to do.
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