Writing Feedback / Parents should send their children to school and let them live happily [3]

Taking IELTS in 4 days. Tried to write another essay, need an opninoin what ban can i possibly get??

Topic: Children should never be educated at home by their parents.

Many families choose to educate their children on their own, rejecting the public education system. That means that a child does not attend classes in school and has lessons at home with private teachers or even his own parents instead. There can be plently of reasons for such decision but many parents do not take into considiration the importance of socializing which is provided by school. Personally, I belive that communicationg with other children is essential for every kid and therfore home education cannot affect child's life well in most of the cases.

The first and the main argument is that schools give a unique opportunity for pupils to spend their time in a group of classmates which is indeed a vital experience for every child. Many parents try to protect thair children from every little problem existing but it can be tricky. In order to learn certain qualities, kids should face difficulties so that, if there ia a need, they are able to provide a solution to some problem. Different challengies play an essential role in everybody's life as thay teach how to survive. Getting education at home takes away this important knowledge so children cannot have an ordinary life in the future.

However, of course there are circumstances under which parents do not have other choice apart from becoming teachers themselves. This includes children with a variety of physical and phsygological diseases which lead to incapability of communicating. These are handicaps with inability to move or exercise and mental illnesses. Moreover, such children can even be a threat for society because they do not always realise the consequences of their actions.

Nevertheless, I do not accept the common opinion that home self-education can have a positive effect on a child. A child's upbringing must include sharing activities with other kids, such as playing different games, doing sports, and studying as well. If parents want their children to be risen properly and have only good intentions, they should send them to school and let them live happily.

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Writing Feedback / IELTS essay - How can young people be made responsible drivers? [8]

I'm taking IELTS in a week and I'd like to hear frank opinion about my English level.
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During recent decades, major percentage of deaths and injuries was caused by car accidents. Careless youth is considered to be the main source of the problem. Some people claim that the decision could be an early driving education. Personally, I completely agree with that idea.

The main argument for me is that the younger someone is, the better he memorizes information. That is the reason why the most important life skills should be learned at school. It is apparent to everybody as well as the importance of driving knowledge and experience. Therefore it has to become a mandatory lesson for pupils equally with mathematics and physical education. Most teenagers are intended to take special driving courses anyway, so it is obvious that this activity shall have its part in schools' curriculum. But yet, there is another even more significant reason.

Accidents on the roads are principally occurred with a participation of a non-experienced or careless drivers. Some of them drive far beyond the speed limit, others do not pay attention on rules, regardless the dangers. Throughout centuries , youngsters have wanted to express their freedom and independence, and now cars provide such possibility. Those who receive an auto as a present after graduation are most likely to get into trouble as they always have a desire to show their maturity. However, it can be clearly seen that a great deal of them are simply children who are definitely not ready for responsibility.

Nevertheless, these young drivers can be teached properly in order to prevent their carelessness and overconfidence. If they receive these skills from schooll classes, they would be more attentive and respectful to laws in the future. I believe that public's concerns will vanish after making drive courses obligatory in every school.