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Jul 13, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 2: GOVERNMENTS SHOULD BAN CIGARETTES AND OTHER TOBACCO PRODUCTS [5]
Addiction to smoking has been a serious problem for a while now. The causes of it could lead to several death related illnesses but people still cannot fight with the starvation for tobacco products.Many ways for helping people to stop smoking have been invented in recent years: electronic cigarettes, nicotine patches, chewing gums and etc. Yet, people still find it very hard to give up and one of the main reasons is that as long as tobacco products exist there will be a market for them. Therefore, it is common opinion that they should be banned by the government as a matter of the public health.
One of the main reasons for the existence of cancer is cigarettes. They destroy people's health slowly but constantly. Tiredness, headaches, stomach problems, they are all connected with smoking. The lung in our body is one of the major parts in it. Through breathing we energizes ourselves. Destroying our lungs while smoking is a slow but steady killing of every single cell we have.
The addiction to tobacco products is not only physical but psychological. Therefore, a ban should exist because, where adults could understand the consequences of smoking, young people start without any concern of the them. Until they start realizing how important is that, they are griped by the addictions as everybody else.
The mass production of tobacco products is industry that creates jobs but same time is so crucial for the health that the contribution of it is far smaller than the negative effects of it.
Therefore the ban should exist and the whole industry should be banned as a major contributor of the most serious illnesses in our century.
Addiction to smoking has been a serious problem for a while now. The causes of it could lead to several death related illnesses but people still cannot fight with the starvation for tobacco products.Many ways for helping people to stop smoking have been invented in recent years: electronic cigarettes, nicotine patches, chewing gums and etc. Yet, people still find it very hard to give up and one of the main reasons is that as long as tobacco products exist there will be a market for them. Therefore, it is common opinion that they should be banned by the government as a matter of the public health.
One of the main reasons for the existence of cancer is cigarettes. They destroy people's health slowly but constantly. Tiredness, headaches, stomach problems, they are all connected with smoking. The lung in our body is one of the major parts in it. Through breathing we energizes ourselves. Destroying our lungs while smoking is a slow but steady killing of every single cell we have.
The addiction to tobacco products is not only physical but psychological. Therefore, a ban should exist because, where adults could understand the consequences of smoking, young people start without any concern of the them. Until they start realizing how important is that, they are griped by the addictions as everybody else.
The mass production of tobacco products is industry that creates jobs but same time is so crucial for the health that the contribution of it is far smaller than the negative effects of it.
Therefore the ban should exist and the whole industry should be banned as a major contributor of the most serious illnesses in our century.