Writing Feedback / CITY&GUILDS: Human beings do not need to eat meat in order to maintain good health... [5]

Topic: Human beings do not need to eat meat in order to maintain good health because they can get all their food needs from meatless products and meatless substitutes. A vegetarian diet is as healthy as a diet containing meat. Argue for or against the opinion above.

LIFE WITHOUT MEAT

As you known that mankind have to eat different kind of food. Many people do not eat meat and meat products. The others are eating meat. So, it has been discussed for a long time whether human beings do not need to eat meat in order to maintain good health because they can get all their food needs from meatless products and meatless substitutes or not. The purpose of this essay is to analyze two main cases which are killing animal and health.

The first factor which is killing animal will give you some informations about meat. People, who tend to think that eating meat requirement is given a right by God, say there is no reason to hunt and kill animals for eating them because we had created with eating them. Also, in some religions have an important state killing animal like ship and they believe to pray to God. Nobody forbid their religious belief. In addition, there is a date that people have the right to hunt animals. Because of this right any people blame them but if they kill more than given numbers, the government can punish them in order to cause extinction. Hence, hunting animals and killing animals due to religious beliefs which is a legal are controlled by the officers.

On the other hand, vegetarians think that why people do not eat herbal food. They say that it is also healthier than meat, for instance, oat meals contain lots of complex carbohydrates, proteins and low fats. In contrast, there are many people who disagree. They often say that herbal foods are less nutritious than meet product's food. Therefore the meat is very important for having muscles. In addition, the fishes improve also efficiency of brain.

To sum up, as we can see, there are so different unknown about meat. People who want to eat meat do not have to consume any other products. The information given above, every person has the right to hunt animal or catching fish. Also, it should not forget that everyone must respect each person's belief.

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Letters / City&Guilds: Letter to a friend expressing how you feel about being this age. [4]

Topic: You've recently celebrated a significant birthday. Write a letter to a friend expressing how you feel about being
this age. What's good and bad about it? Write between 150 to 200 words

Dear Hakan,
How are you doing? Thanks for the last letter and forgive me this so late response. I've been unbelievably busy
for last 2 weeks, as I was preparing and planning my 21th birthday party. It took place in my family's mountain
house last Saturday and over fifty people who are my friends from university came to join the party. Honestly,
that was one of the best parties by now. It's a pity you couldn't be there. Anyway, I find this age really exciting!

I'm just meeting new foreign people at school. Last month I met an Russian person who is taller than me and
she is really fascinating because she told me about her life. She has had increadible life. Two or three years ago,
I imagined that maybe I could converse any foreign person. Anyway, I haven't found any disadvantage about this age so far,
really! Now, I am at Kackar Hotel. Here is so cold and rainy. Maybe you would visit me next month and
we can go shopping or just to a café. I haven't seen you for ages! We can discuss about our past stories together,

it will be great. DON'T FORGET! You would brought the last technological mobile phone. You know that mobiles' price are too high.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Love, Berat

Writing Feedback / "Watching TV is bad for children" agree or disagree? / Use Specific Reasons [5]

In modern life, people invented some new social requirements for continuing life. However, some of these have big bad results for children. Television plays very important role in children lives, and it is also main source of entertainment for them but it is so dangerous for them. Watching TV by children causes some cases which is personal life, inadequate education and poor relation.

The first case is personal life. It is well-known fact that when children focus on screen they save all the details their mind. Sometimes they try to show many attractions in their lives. In this case, they do not realize real life because children's eyes and brain move abnormally. For instance, a few years ago a child thinks that I am a super hero like "Pikachu" who is a Bucky and the child tries to fly like it but the child died. So, parents should be careful for their children.

The second maybe the most complaining point is inadequate education. Education only does not depend on teachers' ability, but also whole family individuals should take responsibility as children tend to watch TV more times. As a result of this situation, children do not do homework and do not study lessons because of no time. Also, they usually see low exams score according to the exam results.

The last subject is poor relation. Relationship between family members is losing day by day. As you know that every night members of family watch TV opposite the television and all of them focus on it. In addition, anyone converse each other. As it is seen, watching TV more time affects negatively not only on children but also whole family members.

In the light of the information given above, in developing world children need to protect negative things which manage children's memory. Thus, father and mother should have responsibility. Especially, they must warn their children and parents should submit a proposal to watch TV about 1 to 2 hours in a day for children.

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