City&Guilds: Letter to a friend expressing how you feel about being this age.

Topic: You've recently celebrated a significant birthday. Write a letter to a friend expressing how you feel about being
this age. What's good and bad about it? Write between 150 to 200 words

Dear Hakan,
How are you doing? Thanks for the last letter and forgive me this so late response. I've been unbelievably busy
for last 2 weeks, as I was preparing and planning my 21th birthday party. It took place in my family's mountain
house last Saturday and over fifty people who are my friends from university came to join the party. Honestly,
that was one of the best parties by now. It's a pity you couldn't be there. Anyway, I find this age really exciting!

I'm just meeting new foreign people at school. Last month I met an Russian person who is taller than me and
she is really fascinating because she told me about her life. She has had increadible life. Two or three years ago,
I imagined that maybe I could converse any foreign person. Anyway, I haven't found any disadvantage about this age so far,
really! Now, I am at Kackar Hotel. Here is so cold and rainy. Maybe you would visit me next month and
we can go shopping or just to a café. I haven't seen you for ages! We can discuss about our past stories together,

it will be great. DON'T FORGET! You would brought the last technological mobile phone. You know that mobiles' price are too high.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Love, Berat

"an Russian person"
---> a Russian person.
"she is really fascinating"
-----> she is really fascinated.

Thanks for your last letter and please forgive me for this late response.


... Honestly, that was one of the best parties I have ever had so far.


.... Well, you are supposed to talk more about your feelings over being 21. Talk about freedom, challenges, future, past etc. as a 21 year old.

In this letter you need to have a greater focus on your age and things that are associated with your age. There's only very little said about that.


.... it seems you don't address this part at all :(


.... okk... then tell why. On what grounds you say your life at this age is very advantageous?
You need to have some thought process before you write an essay. First read the prompt carefully and understand the features it is requiring. Then proceed with writing :)