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Aug 25, 2013
Undergraduate / UNEQUAL EQUALITY; recent incident that took place in India. [2]

An eminent intellectual said that the underdeveloped communities were the most corrupt communities at the Literature Festival,which their remarks are criticized afterwards. He said that he would make a statement that may seem impolite, but later he clarified his statement . But in my view ,his statements were misquoted.When we closely view the panelists' discussion we cannot find any wrong statements that he said. There was a pun in his words which he failed to state in proper way and so this misunderstanding led protests all over the World.

*(Hem düşüncelerini iyice açıklamışsa nasıl mecaz anlamı düzgün bir şekilde ifade edememiş, düşünceler biraz çatışmış gibi geldi .Ayrıca ilk cümlede özne ve yüklem bulamadığımdan kendim bir cümle kurdum yapabildiğim kadar:)
reckless   
Aug 21, 2013
Writing Feedback / Work during GAP Year; Good or Bad? [4]

Getting used of working while going to school earns students many prosperities and it expand their view towars the life.Sometimes , it can create hardships for students have to deal with both their lessos and jobs .Still,they can turn this problem into an advantage.İntensity in their life makes them more disciplined and systematic and also mature in accordance to their mates.In this text we will deal with what working in while going school provide students with.

To begin with,many families bother to make their living .Sometimes they can not provide children with enough materials necessary for their education.This make some students find jobs to support family budget or their education life .They face with troubles to do both things at the same time .But still, taking responsibility and not laying all expensenses to their family contributes them to develop in mental way.They begin to perceive the world bigger than their age .

Compared with their peers ,we observe that working students become more disciplined and regular .They programme their life according to the time of their duties .For instance , they study their lessons in time and do not live it tomorrow.At the weekend ,they work and earn their money.This settled life progress their skills and they become more decisive ,prospering ,contrary to the belief that working students can not accomplish anything.

Another advantage provided by working is that students can not bother to enter in business sector.As they are used to it and they are experienced ,finding job can be easier for them .Also,they can possesses qualities and skills wanted and their experience put them into an advantegous place and so process of being admitted the job speeds up.Those people are employed and make their living even if they fail in university exam , with the money they earn ,they join a course and create potentialities to enter the exam again.

All in all,we all acknowledge that life is compelling and it needs to struggle .Working in early age helps student seize the life ,take responsibilty and realize the sorrowful truth of life early .Those students provide plus money for both for their family and themselves and they can become more determined ,systemtic and successful and can not become frail .This success follows them in their acadenic ,social and private life .Foremost advantage is that they do not let anybody or any obstacle impede them because they have learnt to resist towards life since their early age
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