Writing Feedback / Gre -- Argument; homeowners in nearby Brookville community [2]

"Seven years ago, homeowners in nearby Brookville community adopted a set of restrictions on how the community's yards should be landscaped and what colors the exteriors of homes should be painted. Since then, average property values have tripled in Brookville. In order to raise property values in Deerhaven Acres, we should adopt our own set of restrictions on landscaping and house painting."

In the mention paragraph the value of property in Brookville community increases in seven year by implementing some restriction and landscaping and thing they are implementing for the Deerhaven Acres but they didn't provide the proof of that hike in price and its effect on the community. the argument is full of fallacious and it need to be elaborate with all factor and reason.

In the above argument, relations are made between landscaping and price value of the property but it is totally uncommon to relate certain thing with their aesthetic, coloring and beauty with price value. They are mentioning that before seven year it was not much valuable than it is now, but for this increment in price value of Brookvile community yard may have another reason like development of that place due to establishment of new company , opening of mall, Movie Theater, opening of new school/college as so on. But we can claim directly aesthetic was the main reason of hiking of price as it claim in the argument. Something gets value only and only, if and only if, it can help mankind. For the development of certain thing many factor works, we could not be judgmental on only one cause as the Brookville community did.

In the above argument, it is not mention what restriction they comprises in landscaping, many time painting and coloring contain certain chemical effect or causes of infection on people may be it can affect the children of that community. Such a common restriction if you are applying on the Deerhaven acres, it may or may not work. You are extrapolating something based on only one reason that is naive, a good person or a diligent people seeks all factor that may causing effect to certain thing.

Further, it mentioning, in order to hike the price value of Deerhaven acres implementing same idea as they mention for Brookville community but before implementing something we should be inquisitive, It is not necessary, every function work everywhere. That may have adverse effect on the community people or may be in place of hiking price it lost its own value .

For development of any land or place house painting cannot be the main reason or factor.

Implementing or experiment of certain thing is always good but not blindly and only one thing cannot be the reason of development. They should give proper point and convince people by their own idea so that it helps other.

Writing Feedback / GRE ISSUE --''bookish knowledge without experience is useless'' [4]

Bookish knowlege is like knowledge of law and principle but practical knowledge is a realization of law and its implementationin the real life.bookish knowledge bound our limit in some of the case but imagination and practical doing can give real treatment of subject. all older discoveries ans new one as well are the result of practical doing.

Practical experience is the real experience for many of the people . if you are thinking something and next time you are experiencing same thing that will give you better understanding of your thought.if people think and then do it, in certain way that is called realization.Realization only comes through experience and real time problem facing attitude.

Most of the initial devolopement which happened in earlier age was just random doing of imaginary thinking. No budy was teache them in a classroom and no body gave the principal of discovery,it was just a experience .

When Newton had discovered the law of gravity , he did not thought the law of gravity in the classroom but just by practical experience of falling fruit from tree gave him a realization of a main law in phys.

Every material has their own characteristics their own yield and ultimate tensile stress point but before making any of practical model engineer analysis prototype model or one real model in practical envornment .

If we like practical thing or experimental work then we can devolope theory or new discovery but , if we know the theory then that need not be successful in practical application .Theory gives law principle and metholodgy but by experience we get complete knowledge law, theory, knowledge and practical application .In that context Japan and Chinna are the appropriate example of practical doing. in these country people focus on practical doing science childhood instead of sitting 8 hour a day in classroom and listening lecture of old professor.Suppose a padogogy teaches a 5 year child how to walk and how to speak theoretically suppose the outcome of the teaching .but if you start walking by holding his hand and give him some support or gave him practical feeling of walking then saw the outcome .

Suppose you start giving a theoretical knowledge of a baseball player , about impact , torque, and deformation then will he become a good player or tell him to go and practice in the groung.

In real life most of the mechanics are not engineer but they know some of the phinomenon better than the classroom engineering ,does some body teach them , not much but they realize that by practical observation.

So in educational institute impementation of practicl knowledge is more required than theoretical doing. It gave a real feeling of subject than a bookish knowledge and it remain in memory everlasting.