shin122
Oct 4, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK1 THE GRAPH SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF UK AND INTERNATIONAL STUDENTS GAINING SECON.. [3]
this is chart
this is chart
shin122
Oct 4, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK1 THE GRAPH SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF UK AND INTERNATIONAL STUDENTS GAINING SECON.. [3]
The bar chart illustrates the rate of Uk and international students achieving second - class degrees or better in eight subject in Uk university. In general, degrees result were good for both students in Uk and Students who come from another coutries.
Specially, more Uk students than international students acheiving second- class degrees in English literature, Art history, International Law and Sociology. The highest percentage of UK students gaining second- class degrees was 80 per cent in Art history and sociology. However, the rate of international students was appropriate 75 per cent and 78 per cent respectively in two subjects. Futhermore , the biggest gap was in international Law, where three quarters of Uk student gained second- class degrees or better. Meanwhile , fewer than half of international students attained this level.
It is clear that the higher proportion of International students achieving second- class or better was in Elecitrical engineering and Information technology. In detail, the percentage of students who come from another coutries twice as much as that rate of uk students in Information technology.
The same rate of Uk students and international students achieved second - class degrees or better in Nursing and Accounting.
It is clear from the data of chart that Uk students and international students had different stregths when studing for degrees in this Uk university
The bar chart illustrates the rate of Uk and international students achieving second - class degrees or better in eight subject in Uk university. In general, degrees result were good for both students in Uk and Students who come from another coutries.
Specially, more Uk students than international students acheiving second- class degrees in English literature, Art history, International Law and Sociology. The highest percentage of UK students gaining second- class degrees was 80 per cent in Art history and sociology. However, the rate of international students was appropriate 75 per cent and 78 per cent respectively in two subjects. Futhermore , the biggest gap was in international Law, where three quarters of Uk student gained second- class degrees or better. Meanwhile , fewer than half of international students attained this level.
It is clear that the higher proportion of International students achieving second- class or better was in Elecitrical engineering and Information technology. In detail, the percentage of students who come from another coutries twice as much as that rate of uk students in Information technology.
The same rate of Uk students and international students achieved second - class degrees or better in Nursing and Accounting.
It is clear from the data of chart that Uk students and international students had different stregths when studing for degrees in this Uk university
shin122
Oct 3, 2013
Writing Feedback / Ielts Essay task 1 : Different forms of entertainment over a five- year period [3]
I think you should use : the bar graph compares
In general or Overview
United states spent
i think you should use past tense in this essay :D. hope it useful with you
The bar graph provided shows different
I think you should use : the bar graph compares
A quick overall view shows
In general or Overview
United states spends
United states spent
i think you should use past tense in this essay :D. hope it useful with you
shin122
Oct 3, 2013
Writing Feedback / IETLS Proportion of population aged 65 & over; Aging will accelerate after 2030s [3]
All the country present a upward situation. ---> all the coutries presented a upward situation
Sweden go upward signally ------> swenden goes/ went upward signally
I think the way you use verb form is not right. You shoul identify clearly about this because it 's very important :)
All the country present a upward situation. ---> all the coutries presented a upward situation
Sweden go upward signally ------> swenden goes/ went upward signally
I think the way you use verb form is not right. You shoul identify clearly about this because it 's very important :)
shin122
Oct 2, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 1 THE GRAPH SHOWS THE PERCENTAGE OF UK ADOLESCENTS FOLLOWING A VEGETARIAN DIET [5]
thank you so much. But i cannot attach the chart and i donot know the reason. Can you give me some directions about it. I have just started learning Ielts so my writing is bad. hope you will help me in this. Can we become friend and exchange email :).
thank you so much. But i cannot attach the chart and i donot know the reason. Can you give me some directions about it. I have just started learning Ielts so my writing is bad. hope you will help me in this. Can we become friend and exchange email :).
shin122
Oct 1, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 1 THE GRAPH SHOWS THE PERCENTAGE OF UK ADOLESCENTS FOLLOWING A VEGETARIAN DIET [5]
The chart describes the rate of Uk teenagers having a vegetarianism. As can be seen from the chart, the amount of young people in the Uk who choose to eat a vegetarian diet increased gradually from 1960 to 2020.
Between 1960 and 1980, the percentage of Uk adolescents following a diet without meat or fish rose dramatically, until 1980 it peaked at 16 per cent. Then, after declining sharply over the next fifteen years, it reached lowest point at 4 per cent. There was a slight rise, followed by a gradual dip until 2000. Since then, it has increased modestly over next ten years. It is predicted to level off thereafter.
Overall, the graph shows two main periods of interst in vegetarianism among young people in the UK : one peaking around 1980 and the second projected to peak approximately thirty years later , in 2012
The chart describes the rate of Uk teenagers having a vegetarianism. As can be seen from the chart, the amount of young people in the Uk who choose to eat a vegetarian diet increased gradually from 1960 to 2020.
Between 1960 and 1980, the percentage of Uk adolescents following a diet without meat or fish rose dramatically, until 1980 it peaked at 16 per cent. Then, after declining sharply over the next fifteen years, it reached lowest point at 4 per cent. There was a slight rise, followed by a gradual dip until 2000. Since then, it has increased modestly over next ten years. It is predicted to level off thereafter.
Overall, the graph shows two main periods of interst in vegetarianism among young people in the UK : one peaking around 1980 and the second projected to peak approximately thirty years later , in 2012
