Writing Feedback / 'Children tend to imitate parents behavior'; Children - good members of society [3]

Children should be thought to be a good member of society. While some people think parents are duty-bound to teach children to react positively in the society others, believe that schools are fully responsible for this. I personally think it is both parents and schools duty to teach children to be good for the environment.

For one thing, the main reason, for those who think parents have to assume/wear the mantle to rear children for the social norm, is that children tend to imitate parents behavior. That is to say, parents are a role model that children learn from. Moreover, children spend more time with their parents in comparison with others. It means that, not only do parents have tremendous impact on their behavior but also parents can monitor them closely.

By contrast, other supposes that school has been sociocultural place and it has good atmosphere which can lead/propel students to learn how to become a useful/normal member of the society. For instance, when student faces a problem: his teacher will assist him to solve that. Furthermore, teachers have a scientific way to teach. For example, when child fall out with his friend their teacher will teach them how to figure it out.

To conclude, from my point of view both parents and school have to share the responsibility together in order to prepare children for the real life and for the real future.

Writing Feedback / The benefits of travelling for the traveller [4]

Today more people are traveling then ever before, why is this case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler?

As a matter of fact people in late decade people are more inclined to travel than before. In comparison with the past that people had to spend months or even a year on roads and seas to reach destination, in this century development of technology lay the foundation for us to travel more, faster and in easier way.

Writing Feedback / Some people think that parents should teach children ; INTRODUCTION [5]

Topic: Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Education is one of the major factor that directly impact on being good member of society. While some people think it is the duty of parents to teach children to be good at society others believe that schools are fully responsible for this but I personally think it is both parents and schools duty to teach children how to be good in society.