hikarulap
Oct 20, 2013
hikarulap
Oct 20, 2013
Writing Feedback / I live in beautiful Vietnam; My Country [4]
I live in Viet Nam which is peaceful, happy, no terrorism, friendly, beautiful country.
Viet Nam is an Agricultural area with many green rice fields, beautiful step rice fields. i love to see the scenery, it started to dawn, everybody get up and go out to rice fields to work whose working-hard. i like the character of Vietnamese people whose is friendly, patient and working hard.
Talk about agriculture, before, with the poor farming techniques, food productions don't meet the demand. nowadays, this old farming techniques in place of new methods from the efforts of government and farmer, they have introduced new strain of seed, new method of fertilization, improved irrigation techniques belong with sustainable farming techniques should allow farmers to boost aggregate production in order to meet demand. however, the remaining of weakness is politic and infrastructure.
i hope one day Viet Nam have a lot of food production which meet demand and export all over the world and almost people know Viet Nam as which country have good food productions and developing agriculture.
I live in Viet Nam which is peaceful, happy, no terrorism, friendly, beautiful country.
Viet Nam is an Agricultural area with many green rice fields, beautiful step rice fields. i love to see the scenery, it started to dawn, everybody get up and go out to rice fields to work whose working-hard. i like the character of Vietnamese people whose is friendly, patient and working hard.
Talk about agriculture, before, with the poor farming techniques, food productions don't meet the demand. nowadays, this old farming techniques in place of new methods from the efforts of government and farmer, they have introduced new strain of seed, new method of fertilization, improved irrigation techniques belong with sustainable farming techniques should allow farmers to boost aggregate production in order to meet demand. however, the remaining of weakness is politic and infrastructure.
i hope one day Viet Nam have a lot of food production which meet demand and export all over the world and almost people know Viet Nam as which country have good food productions and developing agriculture.
hikarulap
Oct 20, 2013
Writing Feedback / TV & Movies have negative effects on children. [3]
Watching television is the most common things that people do during their leisure time. In my opinion, I disagree with children watching television and movies effect their mind badly.
First of all, watching television and movies is one of the ways that children can increase and develop children's brain. For example, children could learn English naturally by watching cartoon and kid shows in English. And also, watching reality showsllikelike musics, movies, dancing could increase their creation's mind about the art. In addition, Channels like Discovery or National Geographic, give them information about wildlife .
Another reason is watching televisions and movies is the ways they can share their opinion about the worldtowith their family members. And also, it is one of the ways to gather people in family after a long day work. In this busy life, television and movies could be the easiest way to entertain and relax.
Besidesthosethese benefits of watching televisi on and movies in children, there are a few disadvantages. Watching too much television havehas bad effects on eyesight. For example, there are many young children having a bad eyesight because they are watching television all daysday . In addition, television and movies content too much adult and violence scenes will might be effects tothe effects of their mind. Moreover, more and more children nowadays are addicted to watchwatching instead they plays outsides with their friends.
In conclusion, watching television and movies have many benefit to develop children's creation and languages. But also, if parents let themwatchingwatch too much, children will have bad effects inon their mind.
Watching television is the most common things that people do during their leisure time. In my opinion, I disagree with children watching television and movies effect their mind badly.
First of all, watching television and movies is one of the ways that children can increase and develop children's brain. For example, children could learn English naturally by watching cartoon and kid shows in English. And also, watching reality shows
Another reason is watching televisions and movies is the ways they can share their opinion about the world
Besides
In conclusion, watching television and movies have many benefit to develop children's creation and languages. But also, if parents let them
