Undergraduate / UC Prompt "From taking ELD classes for 5 years to taking my first AP class in high school" [3]

Using sentence structure/ writing accurately

- Varied and sophisticated sentence structures used to impressive effect
- Uses a range of punctuation highly purposefully and effectively; punctuation is another means to heighten impact of writing
- Spelling is almost always accurate; accurate spelling of specialist or less commonplace vocabulary; impressive control over even highly irregular spellings.

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Book Reports / Día de los Muertos (day of the dead) is really old; grammar check [2]

Using sentence structure/ writing accurately

- Varied and sophisticated sentence structures used to impressive effect
- Uses a range of punctuation highly purposefully and effectively; punctuation is another means to heighten impact of writing
- Spelling is almost always accurate; accurate spelling of specialist or less commonplace vocabulary; impressive control over even highly irregular spellings.

Follow these points when writing.
it might be helpfull

Undergraduate / "A Background or Story so central to my Identity" - My Common App Essay [3]

I have a similar background to you, but I am from the middle east as an Arab not knowing anything about his country origin.
Really good I liked it.

Writing Feedback / "Driven by idea of the 'common good'" ; Constitution of May 3 [2]

Using sentence structure/ writing accurately

- Varied and sophisticated sentence structures used to impressive effect
- Uses a range of punctuation highly purposefully and effectively; punctuation is another means to heighten impact of writing
- Spelling is almost always accurate; accurate spelling of specialist or less commonplace vocabulary; impressive control over even highly irregular spellings.

Follow these points when writing.
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not bad overall, good description

Undergraduate / I began scouring every magazine in my reach; perfect CandidateFIT (Production Management) [2]

Using sentence structure/ writing accurately

- Varied and sophisticated sentence structures used to impressive effect
- Uses a range of punctuation highly purposefully and effectively; punctuation is another means to heighten impact of writing
- Spelling is almost always accurate; accurate spelling of specialist or less commonplace vocabulary; impressive control over even highly irregular spellings.

Follow these points when writing.
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Graduate / Ph.D. Aerospace Eng. in Multidisciplinary Dsgn Optimization ; SOP [2]

Using sentence structure/ writing accurately

- Varied and sophisticated sentence structures used to impressive effect
- Uses a range of punctuation highly purposefully and effectively; punctuation is another means to heighten impact of writing
- Spelling is almost always accurate; accurate spelling of specialist or less commonplace vocabulary; impressive control over even highly irregular spellings.

Follow these points when writing.
it might be helpfull

Essays / Shalom fellow Gideonites. I won't be introducing myself like what the others did [4]

You should have:

well-constructed and assured whole text shaping
subject matters/ideas presented in appropriately sustained way; assured judgments made about the impact of depth/detail on readers engagement.
assured and confident control and crafting of language, with words' effects deliberately worked for.
confident and skillful use of form, with assured absorption of generic elements.

OVER ALL IT WAS GOOD