Writing Feedback / why do we need music? Traditional Vs Contemporary Music [9]

there are many different types of music in the world today. why do we need music?is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays

many countries prefer music because it is also one of the part of their life that'sway all countries are like to prefer that. every person like to listen the music every day.there are many different types of music in the world today.traditional music is more important than the international music. traditional music is listen to everywhere by using our technology.

music is used in various ways(used in advertisements, entertainment(movies) and also various functions(like birthday parties and marriage etc)).so music have very important in our life that'sway we need music in daily life. actually music have been helping to enthusiasm in our daily life. nowadays so many people like to listen music because relief their stress feeling. it is listen for some relaxation. i support traditional music is more important than the international music. it is very easy to understand and also very meaning full. so many people like to listen their traditional music compared to the international music. but only some people like to listen international music. that international music listeners are also like to listen their traditional music. some illiterate people can't understand the international music. so they can't interest to listen that type of music. they are only like to interest only on traditional music. this traditional music is listen any to place even airplane also. for example many people leave their own place to go to another countries by the purpose of study or job or any other use. their people also listen to their traditional music by using internet and also iPad. and also music can listen to any journeys without internet. suppose if we download the music in memory cards pend rives and laptops. then these electronic instrument can used to listen to the music everywhere.

so we need music compulsory in various ways. the traditional music is more important than the international music. it is listen everywhere by using internet laptops iPad pend drives etc.

could you please verify my mistakes and also give me any advice for me.