Writing Feedback / hometown clean - if you could change one important thing about your hometown? [3]

People through the history have always tried to make their condition of living the best and it was one of the issues which they are now consider, too. In fact it is related to the same sense of all human kind which can be stated as the willing to reach the best. Obviously, this desire of change can be about everything that is so important for people such as the place in which they live or their hometown. Personally, if I want to declare something that I really hope to be changed in my hometown, it will be about developing the culture of keeping our hometown clean. I think this is a terrible issue, and should be solved as soon as possible because of the following reasons.

Firstly, as we all know, the rubbish is not only harmful for we people but also for our environment. If we throw out our waste wherever we want, we are actually going to destroy our hometown completely. This really brings disadvantages such as the health problems, illnesses, air and water pollution and so on. As time passes, more and more garbage is entering our environment and we don't have much time to find a practical solution.

Another important reason that shows this problem is required to be dealt with is about the landscape of our hometown. From a long time ago, we have been famous all around the world because of our hometown's wonderful landscape. Unfortunately, nobody cares about the area in which he/she lives and as a result we are destroying our beautiful landscape completely. On the other hand, our economics directly depend on the tourists who come every year near our hometown. Therefore, all of us should allocate the specific time to find the best and fastest way to handle this obstacle immediately.

Last but not least, is about what we are teaching to our next generation by making our hometown so dirty. They probably learn this unpleasant culture from us and pass it to their children. All of us are responsible for keeping our hometown clean. We should put strict rules and punish anybody who doesn't obey these rules.

In conclusion, I think that all of us should pay attention more than before to find an effective plan in order to help solve this problem. In this way we can develop our economics along with not polluting our environment and something very valuable is what will remain for our children.

Writing Feedback / Building a large factory in our community - Advantageous or disadvantageous? [4]

Newly a company has declared that it is so interested to establish a large factory near the place in which I live. People in this part of the country and in other places have started to argue about the advantages and disadvantages of this action. Undoubtedly, Building a company in a community often cause some problems along with the benefits that should be considered before making the final decision.

First of all, if we live near a big factory, not only are we in danger of the pollution the most, but also we really have to tolerate the noises made usually from that company. We all know that these kinds of factories should work with the big machines and this mechanical work produces a lot of noise that may be very unpleasant. Moreover, people who live near the factories always are worried about the health of themselves and their children unfortunately.

On the other hand, if this factory is built in our community, it really helps our area be famous immediately and more than before. In fact, people all around the world will know us by this big company in this area. It is also beneficial for our economics. In this way, the establishment of a big factory will affect indirectly on the lives of the people who live here.

Last but not least, this large factory can be useful for many families because people who live here are dealing with the problem of being jobless. Not having enough opportunities of working, people are quitting this state gradually. Though now it is not considered as a big problem, in future, the issue of the rise of immigration can't be solved easily. Thus, this factory will help the employment of the jobless people.

In conclusion, building a large company provides advantages and disadvantages at the same time and this issue has its own pros and cons. In my opinion, because of our economic situation and the jobless rate, we should all support and agree with the establishment of this factory.

Writing Feedback / Books? The knowledge learned from experience will remain in our minds better [4]

Parents all over the world usually try to their best for their children by sending them to schools and universities. But is it really adequate just learning what is said in books or something superior like gaining more and more experience is required? I, as far as I am concerned, prefer to learn everything as practically as possible because of the following reasons.

First of all, I believe that the knowledge learned from experience will remain in our minds better than those gained from books. For example, you can read about the process of building a machine and it is also possible to make one in your own in details. Surely, in a situation you build one, you focus more in different steps and learn everything about it, so as a result this kind of knowledge will remain in your mind.

Second, however it is better to know everything basically and scientifically, sometimes it is more beneficial to reach to your goal by trying for more than one time. During your way you may make mistakes, too. Furthermore, you learn to not lose your hope at all and adhere strictly to your work.

Last but not least, in some societies like my country, the knowledge stated in books are not revised through the time, therefore we cannot just depend on our books. If we want to be beneficial to our society we should try to gain more up to date knowledge. In addition, we can insert our knowledge gained by experience to our books.

In conclusion, by considering the fact that the book's role cannot be ignored, it is more reasonable and advisable to learn everything practically. By experiencing more and more, even though you may have some mistakes, you can gain unforgettable knowledge that can help your society, too.