cvani
Aug 20, 2010
Writing Feedback / Essay about Moving Image Technique in Advertising and Virtual Photography [4]
thank you kevin. I am not a good writer so its gets really difficult for me to write what i want and where.
if we just talk abt the first para then like you said its better if i don't mention the author's name and rather reference him. my main point of the essay is to discuss moving image technique in two different fields so that was the reason i wrote about both areas which wud be further discussed. so i shud add one more line after that but i'm not sure what exactly i shud write. I'd think of something.
"Moving images have delighted and fascinated people all over the world for many centuries. From the first flickering pictures to today's computer generated images there has been an extraordinary technological advances in cinema. Moving images entertain us and also influence us. They offer a fresh perspective on the way we see ourselves and others. But why is moving image always associated with film or cinema? A film can be a sequence of still images running one after another. So it proves that a moving image does not necessarily portray a physical movement. The depiction of surrealism in a realistic manner can be treated as a moving image. Dreams and imaginations are not real but they are still moving images inside our heads. In this digital world a moving image is also considered as a medium which gives an illusion of movement emotionally and intellectually. Virtual Photography is the area where the moving image technique has been used which gives a feel of emotional movement. Advertising is another area where the technique is used in its conventional manner which is producing short clips or videos."
for the 2nd last para its should be:
"Ellen Sandor formed a group called (art)n which produces PHSColograms."
thanks again. I would add more content and post it again with the web links where the video and virtual photography are located.
thank you kevin. I am not a good writer so its gets really difficult for me to write what i want and where.
if we just talk abt the first para then like you said its better if i don't mention the author's name and rather reference him. my main point of the essay is to discuss moving image technique in two different fields so that was the reason i wrote about both areas which wud be further discussed. so i shud add one more line after that but i'm not sure what exactly i shud write. I'd think of something.
"Moving images have delighted and fascinated people all over the world for many centuries. From the first flickering pictures to today's computer generated images there has been an extraordinary technological advances in cinema. Moving images entertain us and also influence us. They offer a fresh perspective on the way we see ourselves and others. But why is moving image always associated with film or cinema? A film can be a sequence of still images running one after another. So it proves that a moving image does not necessarily portray a physical movement. The depiction of surrealism in a realistic manner can be treated as a moving image. Dreams and imaginations are not real but they are still moving images inside our heads. In this digital world a moving image is also considered as a medium which gives an illusion of movement emotionally and intellectually. Virtual Photography is the area where the moving image technique has been used which gives a feel of emotional movement. Advertising is another area where the technique is used in its conventional manner which is producing short clips or videos."
for the 2nd last para its should be:
"Ellen Sandor formed a group called (art)n which produces PHSColograms."
thanks again. I would add more content and post it again with the web links where the video and virtual photography are located.