Writing Feedback / Adult decide to study because of interest in subject/max% cost shared by himself [8]

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Writing Feedback / Adult decide to study because of interest in subject/max% cost shared by himself [8]

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The two charts present the result of a survey of adult education.The bar graph illustrates various reasons for adults' decision on education.The pie chart depicts how the cost of adults education should be shared.

The highest percentage of adults decide to study mainly because of interest in subject (40%) and to gain qualification (38%). Almost equal percentage of adults decide to study to help for their current job(22%) to improve prospects of promotion (20%) and enjoy for learning (20%). The least percentage of adults decide study to get change in job and meet people, 12% and 9% respectively.

According to the pie chart, 40% of course cost should be shared by the individual and it is the highest percentage out of total course cost.The employer and the tax payer should bare 35% and 25% respectively.

Overall, adult decide to study mainly because of interest in subject and maximum percentage of the course cost should be shared by individual himself.

Writing Feedback / Adult decide to study because of interest in subject/max% cost shared by himself [8]

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