erika17b
Feb 20, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS - "Health is wealth " ; average weight of people is increasing [6]
Overall it is a good essay, just go over and and capitalize some things, and maybe add your personal experience or what you do to stay healthy!
Overall it is a good essay, just go over and and capitalize some things, and maybe add your personal experience or what you do to stay healthy!