Writing Feedback / Internet advantages and disadvantages. [4]

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Question: It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Using internet became an indispensable part of life for many people. However some people think that it has a lots of drawbacks. Before drawing a reasoned conclusion let us first discuss both sides of view.

First of all internet noticeably facilitates our lifes. It saves our money and time. For example if in the olden days people payed money for telephone calls, or wrote by hand letters and sent them per post, now we can send e-mail and make internet calls. Also we can make video calls and see someone who live away from us. In addition with help of internet we can shop, book tickets, see movies, without leaving house. Further internet is a great source of information. We can find there any needed data, news, movies, books.

On the other hand there are some feedbacks. To begin with, some sites show violen and sex images, and for parents it is difficut to control what their children see online. Some students use websites which offer ready-made assignments.

Also there are a lots of unreliable information in internet, and sometimes it is difficult to check where information originates from, before using it.
To sum up there are conviencing argument to support both sides of view, as far as i believe that internet is one of the greatest developments of twentieth century. And as long as it used intelligently it is an excellent way to communicate and to find information.

Writing Feedback / Some people argue that it is more importsnt to have enjoyable job that to earn a lot. [6]

Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job, that to earn a lot of money.Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life.

Some people think that it is better to have a delightfull job, while others argue that a good salary is more beneficial. Before drawing a reasoned conclusion let us first discuss both sides of view.

There are several reasons why job should be pleasurable. To begin with we spend at least 30% of our day at work, and if we do not enjoy our work some day it will make an nuisance. Second people who revel their work, they are more succesfull and have more chanсes move up the career ladder. As an illustration all well-turned sportsmans, doctors enterpreneurs are crazy about their works, and can spend at work longer hours.

On the other hand there are arguments to back up the view that a good salary is prior. First most of people are working to earn money the more the merrier. Moreover some people even do not working in there profession, if only to earn more money and ensure high standarts of living. Second in connection with the proliferation of unempoyement, it is not always possible to find enjoyable work, and in this case job seekers are ready to evaluate any proposals.

To sum up there conveincing argumets to support both sides of view. As far as i am concerned that a good job should be comfortable from the four winds and bring both money and joy.